Victoria: I will leave messages for you all over rapture, see you soon
Delta: Awww shit, here we go again

Haha! This is one of the best chapters to a story I have ever read. The Iron Giant was the perfect movie to be inspired by for a chapter. Though you will probably never see this, I just want to say that this chapter made my day.

The iron giant

This reminds me of coraline a little just a teeny bit

Duuuude... like... mind blown...

So from yesterday to today, I read this story. Overall, exempting the grammar mistakes here and there, I absolutely loved this story! I just loved the relastions that fully developed and idk if you thought of a sequel or not but I think it would be good to have one. Again, loved the story and will have my eyes open to see other stories popping up from you good sir/ma'am. Keep it up and stay frosty

CLIFFHANGER!

This is an AMaZiNG story! I cried at a few parts. This is very well done. Nice job! :D

Hey, you based that chapter on The Iron Giant! Ha ha ha! Loved it!

That was really good I could not stop reading... I almost cried at some parts.

Lol best prayer ever

Well my friend. Again, you never cease to amaze me. Even though this story is small comparingly to some of your other work, it does not make it any less touching. I love the way you made this story, as you again are able to keep your readers entertained, yet put enough emotion into a story to bring my cold heart, worn out from life and continuous struggle, back to life. Very nice indeed my good friend, very nice indeed. So again, i thank you, for letting my eyes behold such a compelling story, and i will not forget it. I know by now, that your probably thinking, "Well this person probably says this to everyone, and that he doesn't mean it." Which, i would like to tell you, is a lie. You see, when i enjoy a story, i give people a review on how i liked it, what might need improvement, but mostly a pat on the back for a job well done. Though, when i truly love a story, when you can make me want to re-read it, or bring a tear to my eye, i will say so. So i congratulate you, for not only having one story that left a mark in my memory, but so far, 2. So i thank you, for doing so, you see, i really have needed these stories. Since life can be so tough, its still good to see that i can find stories like this. So thank you, i hope that i have not left any negative marks from this message.

Sincerely,

ZS

hmmm... this reminds of me of something what was it though? OH RIGHT! i remember this entire chapter from IRON GIANT

...so she is the daughter of jack( I hope I guessed it correctly)... Also for what I can think of this is a nice elenor so delta didn't kill anybody I don't think so I say he is lying and covering something because elenor is not a evil biatch. By the way in your story what happens to jack?

...note to self read ALL chapters before reviewing...