OH MY GOSH! THIS IS BEAUTIFUL! THANK YOU SOOOO MUCH FOR NOT MAKING IT SLASHY! You just made me the happiest person ever! I LOVE the Beatles and you made their relationship Georgous! :)

nice, but beatles concerts only lasted a half hour.( I'm not kidding.)

This a a really detailed story,and I love that!Good work,and keep it up!

DUDE. You're writing in the accents is bloody perfect. I loved it. Good job! :)

Nice, thank you.

I loved the idea, what a great story! Such cute interactions between all the boys! Just a word of advice-you probably don't need that big an emphasis on the accents. Very little, if any, indications are needed.
Just a thought :) But really, I loved it!

Sweet fic, I really enjoyed it. But, as a Liverpudlian myself, the dialogue was hard to follow. We Scousers' do indeed speak English! But nonetheless, it wasn't enough to put me off and I enjoyed it immensely. :)

may i ask why didn't john or gorge take the bed

This is a dream-come-true Beatles fanfic capturing my favorite moment of them. Thank you so very much.

I love this story. It's great. There is a bit of oddity with the speech; a bit hard to read, and I can see from what angle "Lindt" was viewing this; it does look a bit Aussie ocker (not cockney) as opposed to Scouse. Other than that, it's quite nice and brilliant.

Really good, though the way you wrote the dialogue was a little confusing.

I really wanted to read this story and like it. I love The Beatles (they're my favorite group) and I love hurt/comfort. Unfortunately, I could not get through this story for the simple reason that the way their conversations were written proved to be a MAJOR distraction. I can see having a word or phrase here or there (like "Come 'ead", which John says in "Hard Days Night" when encouraging the boys to follow him), or using their English slang (like "grotty" or "loo")..but when you change just about every word with what you think it sounds like, it looks messy and mangled to the reader. Those of us who are fans are very aware of how The Beatles spoke and can easily apply that to whatever is written. There is no need to write the word "Wot?" when you mean to write "What?", for example.

..and as for the reviewer who said she loved the Cockney Aussie accents...? The Beatles were not cockney and were not Aussie! They were from Liverpool, England and had Liverpudlian "scouse" accents.

I think you have tremendous potential. Next time, however, I would stick to writing "regular" words with the occasional use of English slang, where appropriate, and leave all the "t's" and whatnots behind. Your story, after all, is what should stand out-not a mangled version of the English language. :)

I really enjoyed your story! It's the best Beatle one I'd read so far. It showed what the Beatles were like; caring and supportive of each other, and their determination to "not spoil the party". Their Aussie ocker accents were also funny. ;) Please go on! It was a most enjoyable and credible read.

this was fantastic! i absolutely loved it! great work! :D :D :D

This story is awesome. Out of the fanfiction's on this site about the Beatles, this one's probably the best that I've read. I really love your use of dialect. Please continue writing more stories about the Bealtes!

-Hoshi Nagaiki