:) loved this. I hope you add to it sometime

Sweet

Great! I so love it!
I think you should continue it..the story is intriguing and I find the Dr Jekyll plot suits the Twilight universe...

Another great one shot, loved Edward and his inner monster!

This is a great story, any plans to continue, even a few more chapters?

Great story, with lots of potential to be continued.

The struggle between Edward and the monster is fascinating and reminds me of a fantastic Darkward story I'm reading; "Hide and drink" by Savage7289.

I like this one a lot! Excellent description of Edward's inner turmoil.

As always...thank you!

Love it.

Pretty dang good for writing it quickly. I especially love the part where Edward refers to the three of them, himself, the monster, and Bella working together. That was brilliant.

Thanks for sharing your writing and I wish you the best of luck in the contest.

Enjoyed your Dr Jekyll and Mr Hyde. Edward's persona just lends himself to this inner conflict of good and evil. Edward always fighting the monster within. Well done. Thank you for writing.

loved loved loved it!

Loved this! Hope it gets continued at some point!

Loved this story. Poor Edward seems to always be struggling with his natural desire for blood.