Awwww that was so sweet! I really loved it!

I like where you're going with this, but there are a number of distracting grammatical errors, including Spock referring to a female as "sir" and writing "hear" instead of "here". I also found that you used Spock and Nyota's names too often. It is unnecessary to refer to them by name in every single sentence. Use he, him, his, she, and her. By using their proper names every time, it gives your writing a slightly unsophisticated, immature quality.

But over all, it's very good.

Adding to favorites.

I've thoroughly enjoyed this story. I can't wait to read your next story!

yay an actual confession! woohoo.

Well done. I love the scene in the kitchen. It is so domestic and quiet. Congrats on completing another lovely story!

That, indeed, was a wonderful story. Thank you for sharing it with us.

0oh so I was right! :) Great chapter.

I love, love, loved this chapter. The romance is so sweet and hot. I especially loved how surprised Nyota was at her body's reaction to Spock's kisses. I also loved the "appearance of impropriety" stuff, esp. the Admiral's comments about Nyota always being in Spock's office and the observations of Nyota's friends.

And, of course, I'm ready to ready to read the next chapter!

hopefully the next chapter has more of hot and sweaty spock!

LOL! I loved the "bio-hazardous" part! BTW...no one can get enough of a hot and sweaty Spock! Hee Hee!

Thanks for the update.

Aw...the wonderful first kiss! I am so loving this story!

I can feel a Lemon coming up? :P

Great chapter.

oh snaps! SEX SCENE!

please make it detailed can't wait