I read this story many years ago and it set my love for Caius aflame. Recently I found my ff login and I've been on a twilight kick too. I remembered this story and so I tried looking for it on the app, nothing (different filters) So I looked through 10 pages on desktop to find this one story! I love this fic I'm glad you made it :)

I am living for Aro and his cookbook and Caius and his Pan-man!

Finally they kissed. Woohoo

Aro and his fascination with human things is funny.
Marcus is probably seeing that the 2 of them will be tied to each other

Hello, I greatly appreciate your fanfiction and I would very much like to have your permission to publish it in French. Thank you for your positive or negative response!

While this is quite childish as a 13 y/o would write. it is quite well written and quite amusing and entertaining. I love it!

Wait... WHAT! HOW? WHEN? WHY?

until chapter 29 I loved it. but this.. this is shit. hate that ending.

it's euro not dollar in Italy...

OML...this is just like The Notebook. The fight in the rain scene ...but I like it anyways.

oups sorry but I still love your story

Where's the sequel? That's so not cool

I let the fact slide that Chelsea can't break such bonds cause it's fanfiction

Here I am, reading this story so many years later and I still love it! Thank you for writing this ️

NO! What the hell!

As I've mentioned before, I like when people deviate a little and attempt to make a character their own but in this chapter I felt like it slipped too far away from the original character. Bella is endearing to me because of her clumsiness but here she can skate when a vampire who mastered the art of being graceful centuries ago falls on his ass. It's too much of a stretch.
I also don't like when things such as HAHAHA are written into a story.