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  FFReader chapter 2 . 1/3/2016 Are you a marketing campaign or what. All those brands and shops just clutter the story and are extremely annoying. Do you read FanFiction much if you do you will notice that putting too many brands and shops is a turn off and all the best stories with a lot of favs and follows don't do this. I suggest you stop doing this as it is pointless and annoying. Without it your story is good but that just ruins it. |
| Guest chapter 7 . 10/3/2013 OMG! I have never laughed so hard while reading a chapter before, but this was hilarious! The queen of england going to red lobster with reservations! that is so f*cked up! ROTFLMAO! |
 greyjeans3 chapter 12 . 4/16/2013 I really like this story and think it has potential. Bit confused about Edward's sudden character change but other then that I truelly hope you continue this. |
| Raogrhys chapter 12 . 10/12/2012 Upload! |
| ShieraSeastarFM chapter 1 . 10/6/2011 You might want to consider hard core revising this, and then reposting. Definitely get a beta reader. I'm not going to bother continuing this story because of all the spelling and grammar errors. There was even a sentence that wasn't finished, just left hanging at the end of a paragraph. I think Bella's character needs to be edited as well, no princess in her right mind would walk into a room with her father, a king, and a guest king from another country, then 'half yell' and huff and puff and 'speak stubbornly'. She sounds like a brat. Plain and simple. I honestly write this as constructive criticism, and with no harsh tone. This story has potential, I promise. But only if you're interested in improvement. |
| AnjV chapter 12 . 8/14/2011 Update soon please, I like the story soo much. Why haven't you updated this story in so long? I want more! |
| walmi chapter 7 . 7/9/2011 I love this story, I think its funny, how the dat eyou picked for the wedding is my birthday, so out curiosity, what does the 14 of June mean to you. :P |
| twilightKC chapter 12 . 2/6/2011 gr8t story love it |
| sophia18 chapter 12 . 9/20/2010 Very good chapter! :P kisses PS: sorry for my too bad english but I am writing but not easy for me to read english |
| 89780975567890 chapter 12 . 9/19/2010 I love it! Update SOON! |
| militato123 chapter 12 . 9/15/2010 Can't stop reading now shit |
| militato123 chapter 7 . 9/15/2010 Ok I'm done reading u should think aboout change ur summary. How is it that they hate each other again? One day and they already love each other? Bella barely playing hard to get I expected edward to atleast work for it but eh whatever |
| militato123 chapter 6 . 9/15/2010 Wtf? They love each other without knowing each other this is every disappointing |
| pmk kelly chapter 12 . 9/14/2010 i liked that chapter i really hope edward doesnt cheat on bella cant wait for the next chapter |
| inmyeyes19 chapter 12 . 9/14/2010 i love it amazing! |
