Very nice! I like the last line. It ties it all together. I also like that monosyllabic Jess isn't entirely gone.

Wow. Amazing and beautiful and cute. We all know Rory and Jess are meant to be together in the end (and if you read the interviews they were giving around the time the finale aired, the writers do, too!).

I like how you've compressed an entire "generic Future Lit" fic into a few paragraphs. Just proves how so much of the "standard" style of Future Lit can be... well... standard. Uninspiring. Insipid, even, in a few cases. But apparently condensing it down into a short little oneshot like this apparently concentrates the awesomeness of Lit and makes the story we've all read a thousand times just THAT much better.

Good fic, my friend, good fic!