Has he slept with Rosalie? He internally thought, 'no way', when he saw the photo of the three of them on the wall. Alice has been with Jasper for quite a while. That leaves Rose, who has Emmett but, for how long? Or, is Emmett Edward's brother? That would have him thinking 'no way', because he knows her. Wonder if his job is a secret to his family? Yikes!

F.R.I.E.N.D.S. enough said.

Please know that defiantly and definitely are not the same word and can't be used interchangeably. It bothers me so much. Also, do you proofread? I notice many places where you leave out a word or use the wrong word. It's always a good idea to proofread in order to make sure that your story flow. Otherwise, I'm enjoying it.

Your grammar is terrible. In one of the first paragraphs you wrote, you said "Bella and I's condo" and that is VERY incorrect. If you remove the Bella out of the sentence, you get "I's condo" and that doesn't sound right. It should be mine and Bella's or my and Bella's. I is a subject pronoun. Sorry if I sound like a grammar nazi, but you really should read over your writing before you post it. And repeat a year of language arts. I absolutely hate it when people are careless with there writing. There is a thing called spell check you know. YOU NEED TO REVIEW YOUR WRITING BEFORE YOU POST IT! People would like your stories a lot better if you were more careful with your writing.

Thanks for reading. And sorry if it seems callous. But, writers like you should be impervious to comments like this. Think of it as constructive criticism.

Over and out.

Off to a good start! There is only one thing that I have to mention and the only reason I am mentioning it is because it is one of my pet peeves. On Rose's shirt, you wrote that it read 'I'm gonna drink til your cute' and when Alice asks Bella 'Your wearing that', what you want to use there is you're not your. Your is possession, You're is You are. Also the sentence ' Oh great now their going to gang up on me' should be they're. Again Their is possession. Ex Their shoes were in the middle of the stairs. You are meaning -Great now they are going to gang up on me. Easily a common mistake everyone does it but being an English major and a writer myself it is a big pet peeve. Keep up the good work though.

I thought she loved Edward.

Why take it out on the phone, it's like you kick your own ass cause it farts. They may be her friends but she's never a real friend, forgive him for what, what did the man do, she had sex too,and at the time it's like Bella to not give a damn in the moment then feel shame later. I hate her today...

"Hunny the man played flute with your cha-cha" ? LMAO! BEST line I've read! Ever! XDDDDDD
LOLOLOL! Damn, I'm done! xD

beers? edwards in AA?

love it!

Hello, I've been enjoying your story until this chapter. I also am not a team Jacob fan, as a matter of fact can't stand far as I'm concerned the books and movies could have been a lot better without him. I think the Cullens should have done him in as soon as they met. So, you understand why this chapter annoyed me because Bella as usual wouldn't yell or scream for help. Instead she was going to let him rape her with her Dad right there. I was alway po with her protecting that creep. Now, I have calmed down, so back to the story.

Hello, Am reading your story and enjoying it. I understand that Bella was shocked to see Edward, but I don't understand why she is upset with him. As far I can see there is'nt anything that Edward did that she needs to forgive for. He was just as shocked as Bella was when he realized that Bella and Alice were good friends.

Loved it babe xoxo

absolutely great! would love to see Edward go through lamaze classes and childbirth - can't wait for a sequel!

Nice job on this chapter :)