Reviews for Motek
dragonBug27 chapter 1 . 9/28/2019
Cuuuuuute
conservativegirl chapter 1 . 6/14/2016
Awwww this is so sweet! Awesome story
Fanficholic1981 chapter 1 . 9/9/2015
Oh man!... I love it!.
So cute!
Zaedah chapter 1 . 11/24/2011
"The kids will be Jewish by birth." Dear Lord! My monitor thanks you for all the tea I just accidentally spit at it upon reading that line. Aside from the newly drenched computer parts, I loved this. Hence adding it to favorites for multiple rereads (albeit without a drink present)
lost in my design chapter 1 . 11/16/2011
Absolutely adorable :) I love it.
Anonymous033 chapter 1 . 10/11/2011
Heee :D

I like this! Not as much as I liked the other story of yours that I read, but it's still very sweet.

And so like Tony to visit a synagogue for an answer, lol! Ahh dear, desperate Tony. I adore the perceptive Rabbi, of course :D

Hahaha "mumbling about crazy, beautifully exotic women". She really does have the ability to make him insane, doesn't she? Coccolissima; I like that :) I love how you've brought their respective cultures into this fic. And yea, I know that's the point of the story lol, but I still love it!

~Soph
messiahthanatos chapter 1 . 11/11/2010
yay! more tony ziva goodness
bookworm45 chapter 1 . 9/12/2010
Hehe. That was cute.
everyme chapter 1 . 9/6/2010
This was really sweet :) I really like the depiction of Tony and Ziva, theyre definitely in-character.

I already thought that it wouldnt be somwthing dirty while reading it, it would have been to obvious... and no, I didnt try to look it up XD I was tempted, but the suspense just grew bigger that way...

The dialogue between the Rabbi and Tony was hilarious :D I was laughing myself silly while reading it, especially the ending. "The kids will by Jewish by birth... I can live with that" :D

Normally, Im not a big fan of the pairing Ziva/Tony, but I really like your writing style, and the plot is really ingenious.

greets
Quinndolynn chapter 1 . 7/11/2010
ooooh I like this...everyone was fully fleshed out, even if they appeared only briefly, AND it was a fresh twist on the usual nickname trope. And adorable to boot! Win.
diana teo chapter 1 . 6/29/2010
I think you've internalised the team so well that they speak through your writing!

Tony and the Rabbi? Excrutiatingly fun-ny! Especially the Rabbi's last comment,LOL!
rubiesandrain chapter 1 . 6/19/2010
AW! Adorable! :)
petuniatc chapter 1 . 6/16/2010
I really like the Rabbi!

Good one!
Danielle chapter 1 . 6/15/2010
This is great. Creative and sooo cute!
Fed up with this crap chapter 1 . 6/13/2010
Very cute story and I like it. Yes using slang can create problems sometimes but as long as they're used correctly I think they're cute. Very funny scene with the rabbi.
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