cute story x3

Inklaced recommended this story to me, and well, it was definitely an interesting read. I had some 'er...' moments as Lance continued to emphasize and notice her age, how she had grown but was still so young, and I admit that I was relieved that he said to wait five years, because otherwise I would have been creeped out. But it's a nice way in which you address the age significance, and your descriptions are beautiful.
Thank you for writing, it's an interesting story, and keep writing! !

So realistic! Absolutely loved it! Nice work!

I love this pairing, there's not enough of this in this the fandom. Love your story as always, great work!

It's been awhile since you wrote this but it was breathtakingly beautiful. As usual your writing never ceases to amaze me :-) I love a lot of the pairings you write about. Sighhhh I can't help but say this... It would be so so nice to have a follow up even tho I love ending. Hehe I'm just a sucker for romance and happy ever afters. It's always so easy to come up with your own conclusion but it's so hard to find closure xD

oh... sad!

Those two are brave and determined. I really enjoyed it!

Good story!

I really love it!

Because of your really good stories, I'm shipping all these pairings I never thought I'd ship or love.

I like the come back in five years thing. It would be nice to see a little epilogue, but I like the ending. It let's the reader imagine the outcome.

I...I...

Please write more. ;_;

PLEASE.

Ah, Kotone/Wataru doesn't get enough love~ this is a wonderful piece. 3 I'm glad I'm not the only one who HGSS has done terrible things to. I never thought I'd ship Kotone/Silver and here I am shipping that, Kotone/Hibiki, AND Kotone/Lance. What the... anyway now I'm rambling. Once again, this is lovely!

Hi.

At the end... I was surprised by Lance's maturity. When I think of it, it's impressing. And my thought of Kotone: understanding.

Maturity and understanding, quite a good couple, hehe.

Thanks for this.

This was nice. I like the idea of them waiting for each other - because its romantic, but mostly because Kotone will be older then. I like this pairing, but it's the age gap that bothers me. Still, you did a good job at painting the mutual feelings they have for each other without really spelling it out. I liked the ambiguity and subtlety of it all.

Only criticism I have, is that the battle was over really soon. Not that I'm particularly interested in reading battles, but it was quite abrupt, you know? I think it might need something in-between to separate it.

~Snoaz

All the things left unsaid...I wouldn't have it any other way.

Good work.

That was...absolutely amazing. You are a truly fantastic writer. You really know how to leave your writers with a fantastic ending, but wanting them to see more. Lovely 3