Quite humourous. It was a splendid twist that even though Revy was convinced that Eda fancied Rock, Eda was actually after her. The ending dialouge was great. You depicted those two characters very well.

Very well-written and believable. I just wish it were longer, so that both Revy and Eda's characters could be explored more. But it gets the job done. Awesome. :D

Two words: frakkin' brilliant. ;-) (Revy and Eda are my guilty pleasures...it's all about the power).

Very nice. Eda is a favorite character of mine and I think you created some nice ideas around her personality. Look forward to seeing more BL stories from you.

I liked it.

I think you brought a new level of thought and feeling to this category. You painted Eda in an angsty, yet manipulative and all around slightly pathetic light. Using Revy was just the icing on the cake. Great fic.

VERY nice.

You get the messed up natures of both of them pretty well, not to mention some great visuals. The idea that Revy had 'buried' Rebecca and she's fighting to escape her grave... wow.

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