The best fanfic I've read with Voltury!Eternity is perfect and this story is amazing!Sometimes yes I agree cruel or scary(When Lei kill her father).But I love this dark Bella and stupid Edward!I hate reading about this couple as a main character in fanf!

OMG I fall in love with this sometimes cruel or painful,eventually after that I know this story perfect!Thanks a lot for Just for the summer!I love Alec and Lei so much!Actually I am not fan of Twilight series book! I hate Bella for me she is so stupid and Edward deserve that kind of girl!Thanks a lot!Always in my heart Ellie!

Loved it!

I'm just picturing Aro finding out about this and going 'Finally!' He totally ships them.. i mean trust exercises?!

This was a really good story

l love it so please update again soon x

I really enjoyed this, though it was definitely a darker story than your Hobbit one. I think you're really talented at writing an ensemble cast. So many authors are good at writing a few three-dimensional main characters, but struggle to make the secondary characters seem like real people (or in this case, vampires). You definitely made the Volturi more human, or at least like people I wanted to root for.

I've never liked the Volturi much in canon, though I wasn't the hugest fan of Bella and Edward either. Okay, let's be honest, canon had a lot of potentially awesome characters who were written so poorly they were easy to dislike. You definitely corrected that flaw, at least with the Volturi. And you somehow managed to bash the Cullen's while keeping them in character, without making them seem like caricatures of themselves. Big props for they, usually I dislike stories with bashing.

The only scenes I really couldn't stomach were the one with the four year old girl clinging to her before being eaten and the scene where she drained her sister and father. Maybe because I was sitting by my four year old daughter at the time.. I dunno. It was pretty horrifying. A realistic approach to vampires though. The Volturi aren't the sparkling super hero Brady Bunch family that Meyer wrote. They're not good.

Thanks for sharing this!

i hope they go farther. one day at least. ;)

I would jump for joy and tell one of them to bite me.

I hate this is horrible Bella would win STUBID HATE AT YOU

this is definitely the best fanfiction i had ever read! love your writing style and plot for this story :) looking forward for more of your work.

Cute and a little sad, though, I love how you see Bella, lol, I like the whole twilight idea, but the romance part is.. Misleading.. I feel like jacob imprinted on RSmee just to appease the fans that didnt want him to end up alone.. Anyhow!
Sad because Im a daddys girl and I dont think I would be able to kill my own family, even for their blood, but I enjoyed the romance between Alec and Lia, glad she was brat til, the end :D
Go Lia! Goodluck with your eternal youth o/

Bye!

I love this story and there's hardly any good Alec/OC stories, so well done for making a brilliant story! I thought you were going to put up a sequel? It's a Shane you didn't.

Wow, I really love your story. I wanted to read all chapters before reviewing... so, here it goes.
I like your style of writing and this story was promising from the very beginning (especially how Alec and Lia gradually fell in love - that was so well done), but I had a feeling the last chapters were written more for the sake of posting, they didn't revolve around Alec and Lia so much and the time passed just too fast. (Btw, what was that about Lia mercilessly killing her own father? I understand that he needed to be shut up, but why did she decide to end his life on such miserable note? If Bella found a way to keep Charlie in her life after changing, why didn't Lia do so?)
I'm not a fan of the Cullens either but they were way beyond OOC in this story. Scenes of fight between Lia and Bella were rather amusing imo (given the fact that I don't like Bella's character either) but the Volturi and the Cullens spitting insults at each other just doesn't fit their charaters at all.
While reading the first few chapters (until Lia became a vampire) I could totally identify myself with her, she was so unique and endearing but as the story progressed Lia became the slightly less cruel copy of Jane and only thing that stayed the same is her undying love for Alec.
Nonetheless, you should know that I really like your fic despite all the flaws I just mentioned and I think you did an amazing job. Please don't feel insulted while reading this, I assure you my intentions were the best. And if you ever decide to write that sequel (even though few years have passed since posting the note), I'll be sure to follow it. ;)
All the best,
Ana

OMG I love this story it was so good. I can't wait for the sequel please upload it soon. Again can't wait for the next story. :)