Uuuuuuhhhh that was adorable
Rin x Len OTP
#twincestiswincest

The Len getting jealous part was tooo cute, oh...and the doing it out of anger part was super emotional. Great story

...WHAT!?

This is so good!

Lol, this made me laugh several times. These two are just too cute together!
Their parents sound like very cool people. :P
Great job, again!

It was a really cute story to read.

I especially liked the GakuLuka reference. .

Thanks for writing this~!

Wow. That was...very...wow. That was really interesting~!

I swear, I'm blushing from the period business and then the condoms-

. Thanks for writing this~!

Nuuuuu~ so cute!

I lol'd really hard when I knew Kumi was approving their relationship, eheheh. And when she was suffocating them (?). I love her for some reason :D

Keep on writing LenXRin! :))

~Hoshi*

This was tastefully humorous. XD I found myself laughing really hard at certain points. Really well written!

genius genius!

i tell you XD

i have a mom like that when my freind came round and slept over when she left us she said "be safe and no porn!" i slipped over and my freind spat all his drink on me when she said that XD

Love it! XD the class rings where a good touch!

loved it and you said this was your first time writing 1st person ... amazing if thers a second one il read it as soon as its out thanks,

I LOVEEE THISS!

10000 THUMBS UP FOR YOU!

wat he means by celebrate? lol i loved it:DDDDDDDDDDD

Hmm. *strokes imaginary beard* This was a rather interestng one-shot. I am looking forward to your future works.