Very cute

what about the baby!

unohana is how you spell the squad 4 captan's name.

also, ukitake is more like over 2000 years old.

byakuya wouldn't say "no problem". he would say something like, "you have permission to date rukia, but you have to follow specific rules...

AW! It's so sad you lost interest the story was so much fun to read. I have read all of your other hitsuruki except the story on momo's POV. I don't know why but since I saw her I didn't like momo. In any case if wouldn't be so bad at writing stories I would have continue it but well... By the way you have a real talent! I love your hitsuruki stories and if I had an account I would mark you as favourite but sadly I do not have one. Well hope you continue writing your wonderful stories

It was OOC and the sentences didn't make sense. But...uh...good story... -'

Wa wa WHAT? You didn't ATLEAST wright the kiss sceane?

AWESOME story.~~~

wait! that cant be it is the baby a boy or a girl!

Byakuya is very interesting. He never stopped surprising me in this one.

Wow, Ukitake just says it in front of everyone? That's a little awkward. Hope Byakuya doesn't kill someone.

Wow, a godfather, an aunt, and an uncle all at the same time? That saves them time. Ukitake is so funny.

Ooh, Let's see what these reactions are, shall we? (evil grin)

o.o you do know that toushirou is the equivalent of twelve years?

i mean, twelve and already father?

but still, nice story .

Unohana is how it is spelt.

awww how cute )