Er... Cool xD I thought this was an AH story? Nvm... Anyways, the capslock is a little annoying, why did you write it like that? Oh, btw, I like the way you ended it :)

'THE STORY CARRIES ON AND EVEN TOUGH MANY OF YOUR HOPES AND DREAMS ABOUT MY 'PERFECT' RELATIONSHIP WITH MY FAMILY ARE ABOUT TO BE CRUSHED IN THE PALM OF MY HAND I'M STILL GOING TO TELL IT BECAUSE YOU NEED TO REALISE THAT LOVE ISN'T THE FAIRYTALE THAT EVERYONE SAYS IT IS. SO ENJOY READING THE END OF THE REAL BREAKING DAWN!'

Lol xD

But, I like Bedward! Not Jedward, lol. Anyway... Yeah. Bella is Eddie's mate! Why would they divorce? Please tell me this has a Bedward ending!

Please don't put your story completely in capital letters. It makes the story hard to read.