| Reviews for The Alpha's Imprint |
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Annelie chapter 5 . 8/17 I'm hoping the vampire is not edward. hahaa Cause he also broke away from the family and I don't konw how you will portray him in this story. Maybe it's laurent? |
Jane chapter 41 . 10/8/2019 I wonder if when Bella told Chase she only wanted his heart, she really meant...ripped out of his body. |
YinYangCancer chapter 16 . 7/24/2019 I was a little hesitant in reading this fan fiction. The story’s that start at a young age have never been my favorite. Mostly because it gets really repetitive after awhile. But honestly I couldn’t bring myself to read past this chapter. They’re forcing her to get married? If Jacob really loved her he would have never forced her. He would have known what’s best from his imprintee and let her live her life. It’s kind of frustrating to me how it resembles brainwashing. The entire clan and her own parents are very much like ‘her opinion doesn’t matter. Don’t worry she’s overreacting right now but she’ll learn to go along with it soon.’ I’m sorry your a great writer I just disagree with certain aspects of the plot! I think it’s because I dated a Pacific Islander before and that’s how his ENTIRE family was to me! They barely knew me. So I know what i’m saying when I say that any self respecting woman would never let herself be bosses around like that. What is she supposed to do? Stay home and cook and clean? Hell no! She’s 18 and if her parents can’t support her decisions and dreams than she has a legal right to LEAVE. gosh. Thank you again for the great writing, and grammar but I disagree with your plot. Good look on your next fan fictions! 3 |
Guest chapter 5 . 5/10/2019 Edward. Or jasper |
Guest chapter 3 . 5/4/2019 No leah? Then I hope Sam imprints on leah |
rachel625 chapter 46 . 10/17/2018 This story was so so so amazing! I literally was so drawn to this story and could hardly put it down! Sometimes I would be so frustrated with how a certain part was going and then a couple of chapters later it all made sense and I was happy again! Your writing style was so great! Making Bella a slayer was an interesting twist and the fact that they imprinted at such a young age was awesome. Jake and Bella made the perfect pair and the things they had to go through made them to be the best Alpha and Slayer combo! Thanks for such the great read! |
Guest chapter 13 . 4/16/2018 Love the twist |
tammgrogan chapter 13 . 3/28/2018 Hello, I just wanted to tell you that this is an Amazing story. I have not read one this good in a long time. Thank you for writing it. Take care, Tammgrogan |
Noor Aslam chapter 1 . 5/31/2017 This is such a good story i have read it 3 timess. Thats very rare lmao |
michelle chapter 43 . 4/27/2017 NO! SHE CAN NOT BE A LEECH |
Guest chapter 38 . 4/25/2017 no idea. please tell me that bella has a plan and is not going with chase cause jacob and bella have to be together late on in the fanfic. |
michelle chapter 33 . 4/23/2017 did u forget the Cullen's and other vampires? I hope not |
liz333 chapter 47 . 1/14/2017 I wish you would continue this ending is such a cliff hanger but a good start to another story |
Guest chapter 38 . 12/11/2016 Ghjklzxvbnmfdsapoiuytrewqqwertyuiopasfdfgghjjklzxcbvnmqwertyuiopasdfghjklzxcvbnm |
Guest chapter 47 . 11/15/2016 Amazing...Couldn't stop reading the entire time |