Never really got into the whole Abby and Tony couple thing but you may have just changed my mind with these two short pieces.

Paige

Love to read more!

more please

Well this story took me by surprise - not that there aren't other Tony/Abby stories out there but the fact that it's only the 2nd T/A story that I've actually liked and they're both WIPs.

I'm normally a Gibbs/Tony fan and I'll never not be but I think I can get behind this and the other Tony/Abby pairing story.

Hope there are more chapters soon (and hope it works out for the 2 of them - eventually).

BuckeyeGirl00000

Sorry didn't post review of CH1 - too busy reading. Can't wait for more. I'm normally a Gibbs/Tony fan but my 2nd favorite is Tony/Abby.

Love that Gibbs knew - always had. Of course he knew, he's Gibbs.

Hope Abby tells Tony anyway.

You really have a knack for getting the character voices right and I love that you get the basics (spelling, syntax, grammar, contractions) correct.

Great job writing the characters. I'd love to see it continue!

I adore this ficlet! You should absolutely continue! It's very sweet and you have everyone pretty spot on!

I'm really loving this story. You create a believable couple with Tony and Abby.

Wow, it's been a while since you posted the first chapter. And now the second chapter/sequel is here. And i've read it and like it a lot. Had to read the first chapter another time because it's been so long since the first came out. but I really like it! Bye

Good job! I enjoyed it very much. I'm looking forward to the rest. Tracy

Oh,wow,another chapter! Are we looking at a multi-chappie ficlet? Loved Tim's epiphany about gets the best closing lines,lol... :)

Awwwww cute great story quickly becoming one of my favorite tabby fics thanks for writing

I had no idea that out of the blue, you'd do another chapter...

Poor Tim, he's finding this so very difficult.

'Nauseatingly good-looking, so even with hs personality he had to get some dates'... ouch! Now it's poor Tony... especially with two people who actually love him still prepared to let him sweat...

Wonderful complexities in all the relationships, fascinating reading, and you know I've always loved the concept of Tony/Abby - I just don't write it because I'd feel too sorry for McGee... but I love reading your slant on it - and I really hope you won't make me wait more than a tear for the next installment.

I loved this ending for the two and the story before this! It's great to see them come together after so many years!

"Abby practically hung from Tony as if he were a set of monkey bars"

Okay, that is now my new favorite line. Poor McGee, having his affections trifled with by a promiscuous wench! This is why Rule 12 exists. And speaking of Rule 12, was that the same long-suffering Palmer who was having it off with Agent Lee in every corner of the building?