You've got them exactly in right. Exactly, exactly.

love this story

I kind of like thinking that this two become a couple in the future, once their wounds have healed. It is really really nice fic-.

You have way with words.

And for that, I thank you.

I would also like to thank you for fulfilling my ever growing Suzaku x Kallen addiction.

Wow. Short, but incredibly intense. I loved how you turned their little encounter into something like a battle, like they're behind their knightmares once more and fighting. I'm pretty confident that was your aim, and, boy, did you nail it. I appreciate the summary.. it caught my attention. Also.. man, was the ending line a killer. You managed to open up another door for me, as to why Kallen/Suzaku makes sense. They're top pilots who gave everything in the war and it's ironic that they both seem to have ended up losing the most. They both have a lot in common and they simply complement each other. Anyway.. I digress. Excellent work.

awesome! i hope you write more Suzallen... and pls update For a Sake of a Smile soon!

Nice Job with this one. I personally think there needs to be a bit more Suzallen here (working on a oneshot right now), and I think you wrote this very nicely. Loved the ending, by the way. :]

Keep up the good work,

~E101

it's very nice to read something from you again, and a suzaxkallen one at that. i agree, the theme is kind of overused but you still definitely did give your own touch of originality to it. i like the fact that they first treated s*ex as some sort of game. Ending was spectacular by the way.