So beautifully written.
I feel so sad for Yoite...why did he have to kill Miharu...?
You put so much feelings into it, well done for that.
Please make another chapter.

That was so beautiful! I loved it! Poor Yoite. Even though its sad it was very persuading like as if that what was really to happen.

Glad you continued. Lovely written. The last line nearly brought me to tears.

So sad...but nicely written. I actually wish you would go alittle further with it.

This was really great! You set the scene beautifully, and the descriptions are spot-on. It's got a wonderful overall arc, like it could be complete, but still I would love to see you continue this... :D

How sad! T.T I felt my heart twinge. I want to read more!