Very nice. It was nice how you showed how the relationship developed through short snap-shots over time.

But..how... you can't just leave the story there! It feels like there was something missing, perhaps some kind of a resolution...? *hopeful* In any case, I really like your characterization of Basch and Ashe. Especially the overprotective and indulgent Basch, but then how is it possible *not* to like him..