| Reviews for Naruto: Revival of the Dragonmaster |
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Ryu wolf chapter 13 . 6/3 Interesting story nice job |
robert krause chapter 2 . 5/18 when Naruto get up the racks he made and get 2 house made in the red lights dc when running his own spy networking was used for keeping eyes on the roots and others too , Naruto and haku had living in the top floor of bakers city now and was doing some workings too when keeping her bed room to the right side and Naruto had his bed room now , when workings nights time Naruto find out about bouny huthers and was the super one now , when think of red eyes now he code name Dragon warrior and his tame mat is ice queen , when Naruto had took out some s class bad guys and woman some had took form the canner vans for when ,Naruto took them out like bad times , when the gold bars had be helpful too , he buy out the bakers vaillge out , and keeping the bar no king fox , and living on the top floor too, |
Kingkong101 chapter 1 . 1/2 Shitty |
Guest chapter 11 . 12/20/2019 Hey I love your story so far ok.. |
Anon chapter 11 . 10/4/2019 Wtf is wrong with your plot. Its all messed up. You dont go crossing every game you like. As much as i like lunar legend and ZLTTP or extra. You may make the plot longer than needed too. Now you just meesing around like Final Fantasy where all the good guys vs the bad guys. Those type of story is long and you also ran out how it is going to go. So bring you a game to it or remove the f'ked up story out of here. |
Monster King chapter 13 . 4/6/2019 Great job please continue |
dpmaragoni chapter 9 . 1/28/2019 I’m laughing my ass off to all the Zelda references I. Chapter 10 can’t post another one for some reason |
dpmaragoni chapter 10 . 1/28/2019 This motherfucker is making a reference to the Zelda series In the beginning for this chapter |
Henry Vaudreuil chapter 1 . 6/9/2018 While your variation of the story is stable the recap skull gave was from third person omniscient rather than that of an observer. This gives the impression that skull and yourself are linked directly and reduces the overall credibility that can be given to his character |
JAIMOL chapter 13 . 11/13/2017 It is a magnificent story. I'm looking forward to knowing how you plan to continue. |
my 2 guys chapter 13 . 11/6/2017 that was good keep the chapters coming |
Pixelation fox chapter 13 . 11/4/2017 Amazing hope you get to continue on the story. |
Mistress Saturn1 chapter 13 . 5/21/2017 Has this been abandonded? |
david.teague.3950 chapter 9 . 5/16/2017 Seriously?! LoZ Ocarina of Time now? Almost wonder if there's going to be a stuck up Zora Princess or a motherly Kokiri. Or maybe a flirty Gerudo who happens to be a thief. Meh w/e. |
david.teague.3950 chapter 3 . 5/16/2017 I wonder if Yakumo would have been one of your dragons I mean seriously while there are a lot of stories that have Naruto paired with multiple women and even harems there's far too few that have Yakumo as a big part of the harem. I assume Hinata might be since she's a water element. |