| Reviews for Alternative Gods |
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kronoan chapter 11 . 5/18 Congrats on getting into the Uni! |
kronoan chapter 4 . 5/17 I'm enjoying this story very much. I know it's lame to be so terse but I'm tired. |
weweremadetobe chapter 1 . 4/15 Wow omygod this is a really good fic I like it |
LuckyNia chapter 14 . 4/11 I Actually stay up till morning. I think it was going to be either 2 or 3 am. But my point is on HOW MUCH I LOVE THIS! I was actually shocked and cry when Ryuzaki shot himself, it broke me because Lighy was hit hard already. Hit hard with LOVE. AND THEN ASDFGHJKL . |
VerdePradera chapter 14 . 2/9 Hello there I just finished reading this and I have to tell you this story was so beautifully written the narrative, the plot and the characters were so delightfully done I loved it. I'm an avid reader and I have been for long but its been some time since I read something that had me clinging to each word and wishing for more every second, the thrill of not knowing what was going to happen next and the adrenaline pumping in my veins with every cliff hanger was such a joy to experience. Light's hornyness and constant need to fuck L against anything made laugh so much especially when his sexual frustration keeps growing. You fleshed him out so wonderfully I loved him to bits and seeing his pain and sadness after L took his life make my heart ache, L was so deep and complex as a character the idea that he couldn't be a God and that he and ai L couldn't coexist was so philosophical and knowing he took it to such a extreme was beautiful to read but also really painful. The story feels like a tragedy and it's also full of action and comedy it a wonderfully crafted work of art congratulations author on your work! |
PenArt chapter 14 . 9/17/2018 WHAT! This was never finished?! It's a great story *the feels* At first I wasn't sure if I should start reading this one, but it was SO worth it! |
KuroiDenki chapter 5 . 8/11/2018 But seriously, is Light so arrogant that he actually thinks it is HIS power to kill? It is blatantly clear that L is the one who kills the criminals, and complies with Light's wishes. I just don't understand how Light could think of himself as a God and believe that L is inferior to him, when the other could clearly destroy him in a moment. |
KuroiDenki chapter 4 . 8/11/2018 Matt is so funny lmao xdd This story is starting to feel like home. And why the Big Fuckign F does Near try to help the USA get rid of Kira and Matt? And worse yet, maybe it could even try to delete the L and M! Like, that's so uncool and fag-like! Near could at least TRY to enjoy making world domination a possibility! Why stop all the fun? Oh well, every interesting story needs a conflict, so might as well see what happens. Hmmm... As long as neither Matt nor Light betray each other, they could team up against Near. I'm at the edge of my seat. Can't wait to read the next chap. |
KuroiDenki chapter 3 . 8/11/2018 Lmao xddd the bit with term Mikami following him was so hilarious xdd good comedy relief I love the concept of this, but one complaint that I would like to express is that yagami is a bit too... sexual for my tastes. But all is well. This fic is by far the most interesting amidst all of the death note fics I've read. A nice original idea. |
Nuclearneonmonkeys chapter 1 . 6/13/2018 I find myself frantic at the work of this hidden gem. I have been apart of the dn fandom for years and I am ever so rarely astonished with a fanfic as I am now. It’s normally another fandom like Harry Potter or just a one shot that leaves my mind racing like this. Thank you for your gift to the world. |
frolovkirill7 chapter 1 . 4/17/2018 Something |
Chris chapter 14 . 2/8/2017 Helloooo! My friend just sent me this fic and I really love it, wish you'd update though even though it's been almost 6 years. It's a good story and I'd love to see more! |
sugapeaches chapter 1 . 11/13/2016 Coming here from Devil's Trill. I'm gonna suffer, aren't I? Yeah. I probably deserve it. |
Angelicake chapter 14 . 10/20/2016 Goodness! This is amazing! I know this hasn't been continued for a while, but I stayed up all night reading this (literally, from 8:31pm to 4 in the morning) and then I realised it was unfinished. You left it at a cliffhanger too! You're wonderful at writing, somehow able to make you work technical yet interesting. It broke my heart when I thought L was dead, and now, I'm all confused because you've just said he's here... And left the story! Gah! Please continue-I even posted this using my account, and not just anon. Don't leave us hanging... My sanity is in your hands. |
iambic-sonnet chapter 14 . 7/26/2016 Oh boy, this is done remarkably and all this hacking and computer stuff made me read the whole story in just three hours, eyes glued in the screen. kicking the rusty gears of my brain and told it to analyze it carefully, making me do a double take on certain paragraphs to make sure I read it right. The story was updated last 2011 and it has been years, I do hope that you will finish this story and I can't wait to read the rest of it. |