good story

THEM FEELS THOUGH XD Amazing. I really like this. It's cute :)

scratch the last review out. I thought when you said rikujokuro shiro was talking, and why do I feel like the name is Engetsu?

Nice, and really? Bakudo number 61 Rikujokuro is the name of Shiro's Zanpakuto. I fi.d it amusing but aside from the zanpakuto choice of name I'm happy/

Agreed lol, the theory doesn't make sense at all, in any context :P
At this point even something crazy like little hollow taking form and following him around are more likely xD

So fluffy!

I believe Ichigo acted very much like himself, we've all seen how protective he is over his siblings, imagine how he'd react if his "twin" for Hell's sake, were ta die an' be taken from him after he just got 'im back.

-snickers- Ya may love 'em but admit it! Ya enjoy watchin' 'em suffer -a Cheshire like grin curling into my lips as my head tilts-

-tilts my head- Ya coulda had Ichi an' Shiro kill the dreaded plot bunnies... Or were they that strong?

-dramatic music plays in the background and lightning flashes as I recoil in horror- It was all Aizen's doing from the beginning!

Ah Tessai, the always accountable creeper!

-stares widely at the screen of the computer- So then what the Hell changed?!

They are so mean ta ya! Evil bastards! But I feel so bad fer the two o' 'em in the story, even now it's heartbreakin'...

An incredible suspense story at that!

...ok even I was thinkin' wtf at the plot bunnies thin', entertainin' but certainly unexpected.
Eeep! Hichigo has a heartbeat!