a pesar de todo fue divertido el final continuala saludos

i wanna fuck whoever wrote this

That was ultimately mind blowing u're a really really good writer keep it up

That was amazing! Five year old story, but perfect character resemblance and great scenes! Continue more! Zorobin ftw! :)

Pfffhahaha, poor Zoro. They're going to have so much fun playing with him... The girls can be devious sometimes, really.

Thanks for writing!

Shit bro.
Just shit.
Imean the good kind.

That was an amazing story

DAMN! That was a really fantastic story! Loved the plot and all, really great, and I love the way Zorro got trapped by the girls haha~To bad there ain't like a continue to this story! This easily turned into a fav :'

Okay that was incredible. really well written and perfect images. you have a talent for this for sure.

Nice, me likey. (and I can't believe this has only 8 reviews prior to mine. I loved this- much more than others I've read with nearly 100.) Oh well guess only moi and the other 8 reviews know a good story when we read one. :)

lol oh, this is much entertaining.

loled at the ending.

I wonder how did he wake up at the deck too.

keep writing

Way too hot! I'm not actually turned on at man and woman sexual. but this made getting a nosebleed. 0/0

Wow, that was reaaally well written and executed lemon, with only a few spelling errors, and it was pretty rushed in the beginning. Greaat job on turning the normally level headed women into tntalising horny fangirls. My only reaal problem with it is that on the summary, it red threesome, but it ended s more of a two on one, or a small gangbang, other than that, a truly impressive display or erotic detailing. Keep up the good work, iinferno54

Oh mu good, this was HOT. o/o

this story was awsome, any chance of a sequel?