Reviews for Your Past, My Future
AlternateInverse chapter 13 . 4/22
Ahhh this was so good /-/
haseosamaa chapter 8 . 1/11
good idea to have mao join, its more funny
FalconRukichi chapter 13 . 7/5/2019
Re read this again and still never change my view I still love it.
Mr. Page chapter 13 . 5/28/2019
Good limerick!
Mr. Page chapter 12 . 5/28/2019
Well, the Special Zone came and is working so far. Not the epic moment I thought it'd be, where Euphie and Zero would stand united, cheering on the future. But hey, at least no one's dead.

I wonder what the future holds in store now that Euphie is alive and Lelouch is waiting for the Emperor to make his move. Only one way to find out. Read on!
Mr. Page chapter 11 . 5/28/2019
A good chapter. I'm happy about the interaction between Lelouch and Euphie. Honestly, I love it when these two talk to each other.

To this day, I don't totally understand what the Sword of Akasha or the Ragnarok Connection are or do, only that by killing God, all individuality disappears and that life and death will have no boundaries. That alone is a lot to take in. You did a good job with the complexity that are the Thought Elevators, as well as trying to explain them.
Mr. Page chapter 10 . 5/28/2019
Good chapter.

Personally, though, I believe Lelouch DOES feel guilt for what happened to Euphie. He was horrified when he found out his Geass went out of control and he was crying when he gunned Euphie down, going as far to say she was his first love. Lelouch may not show his emotion very much, but what happened to Euphie broke his heart as much as it broke Suzaku's.

At least, that's the way I see it. But hopefully he won't make that mistake again. Euphie's death was one of the worst things that happened in Code Geass, not just because it was the death of kind soul, but because of what it did to her beloved brother and her loving Knight.
Mr. Page chapter 9 . 5/28/2019
Excellent chapter. Lelouch is introduced to the Black Knights and meets himself, Zero. Mao plays with Kallen's head. And Euphie misses her brother.

And that last line of dialogue. It makes me so eager to read what happens next. Lelouch's and Euphie's bond of brother and sister is always one of my favorite things about Code Geass
Mr. Page chapter 8 . 5/27/2019
You recruited Mao?! That's . . . amazingly genius. When he isn't a cunning psychopath, he's a very useful and powerful ally.

Honestly, this is the first story I've seen this happen, and I must say, I really enjoy it. Keep up the fine work! :-)
Mr. Page chapter 7 . 5/27/2019
Narita ends on a more positive note. I'm glad for that.

And just when Lelouch was starting to relax, Mao returns. He doesn't have Shirley to manipulate this time, so who will he use against Lelouch?
Mr. Page chapter 5 . 5/27/2019
Is Lelouch taking a note out about Light's Death Note?

Either way, good chapter. Reading about Euphie not being in the hotel REALLY threw my for a loop, because I wondered how on earth Lelouch would get into the building. But Lelouch being Lelouch, he ALWAYS finds a way.
Mr. Page chapter 4 . 5/27/2019
AWESOME chapter! I'm really loving this story. The dialogue between Lelouch and Suzaku was excellent, and your plan to have Lelouch fake Zero's death was brilliant! I can't wait to see the smug grin slapped off Cornelia's face.

"...every time Zero died, he came back, untouched . . . Just as his foes rejoiced his death, they would fear him all the more when the world saw how death fled from him." That paragraph was so invigorating to read aloud.
Mr. Page chapter 2 . 5/27/2019
Yes! Another Re-do Rebellion story! I thought I found them all, but this one was hiding like a buried gem. AND it's complete, too! That's a plus!

So far the story is good. I can't wait to see what differences may arise in Lelouch's do-over.
bla chapter 2 . 3/10/2019
the day i read a fanfic that says "who cares about the timeline" i can die happy... unfortunatly that seems to be impossible...
monochrom68 chapter 2 . 1/28/2019
your version of lelouch is dumb...
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