I am going through updating all my favorites on my WordPress site and was wondering if you have finished this somewhere else?

The story is well written but I don't like the content. Alice should just go home to the Above World; she had more freedom there than she has in Underland. Escort indeed!

For once I'm actually glad this story seems to have been abandoned

vondrea was the one who named him cecil so wouldnt everyone in marmoreal still think his name is alice or something?

this was kinda cool but it just keeps getting worse. it started out pretty great but not so much...not to mention that the whole sapphira thing is just stupid...like you got bored and wrote the first thing that popped into your head...also, alice having an escort seems kind of fake because its sort of alice's choice giving her an escort makes her seem like she's being held captive.

Awesome as always

I'm so glad Sapphira got told off, she was getting on my last nerve! Hehee I'm soo into this story!

Enjoying this story! :)

I am a first tie reader and instant fan! Great story, I love this couple and you seem to have the rare gift of creating intricate and intertwining plot lines! Keep writing, and I'll keep reading and reviewing!

YOU'RE ALIVE!

*glomp*

Hey, this is really well written! You've really managed to capture the characters's personalities!

Although, everytime I see a character played by Johnny Depp with scissors, I picture Edward Scissorhands... *cough* I'm rambling...

AnyWay, I really like how you're going with this fic!

interesting fic. i have to say, i didn't care for alice's angry fit in chapter 9. i didn't really see her character as reacting quite so dramatically. other than that though, i felt that you did a good job overall :)

Great chapter! I really hope to see more soon. The backgrounds and everything else that you are showing us are very interesting. Please update sometime soon?

Nice story. Just wanted to mention the broken sentences. Maybe that's just me using the mobile version...?

Ha ha we finally find out a bit about Cecil :D

That was odd but what in underland isn't