that was really good!

This is the saddest entry I've read so far. It's just so unfair! I read it days ago and I've been thinking about it ever since. I don't know whether to say 'Congratulations', or 'How could you do this to me/us/her/them?'

God love, that was awesome O.O Loved the ending, implied tragedy so there (so much nicer than having it spelled out), and Edward with wings? Oh yeah.

It was sad too, especially the flashback, even got an eye prickle out of me, and that's saying something ;)

omg so emo right now

I have no real words. It's beautifully and heartbreakingly well done. ~Crissa

GAH! Heartbreaking bb. Absolutely heartbreaking. Beautifully written. I remember the beginning of it from WC, but this is a wonderful piece in its entirety. Brava.

Wow. That was fantastic! Thanks! I can't wait to read more of your work!

Thank you for entering.

Good Luck

xx

That comment on Twitter was unwarrented. Nothing compares. Now I need a striff drink.

*swallows hard*

Ugh-guh!

Why didn't you tell me the additions were going to make me fucking CRINGE?

Slap an extra warning on this: don't read if you're PMSing, may cause teary eyes. Jeeze!

Seriously, truly black balloon worthy in my eyes.

You know I personally love the title, loved that whole line from the very beginning. Love it.

And this: "It was obvious, though, in the lines of her face that happiness had been an infrequent visitor here" heartcrush!

So well written darling, so proud of you and this piece. Don't you dare doubt yourself or your wordskills, you're amazing.

Hearts,

wow that was sad...

I think between me and you, we killed Kim's angst love for a little bit. *nods* good work!

xoxoxo

This is gorgeous, poetic, and like a graceful yet effective kick to the nuts.

Oh bb, where to begin?

The tragedy here isn't so much that Edward first appears to be a vamp, but in that he's more of an ambassador of death and that he's been silently and patiently waiting for Bella to join him in their shared eternity of despair and punishment.

That's the tragedy.

Beautifully written, as always! Good luck in the contest!

As you know I thought this was a beautiful & poetic piece of writing - so sad and tragic. Well done bb

So very sad :( But well written VP!