It's seriously what I've looked for in CxD

It's awesome! Keep going!

this is so adorable especial the ending. keep up the good work! cant wait for an update! (plzzzz?!)

I beg

I demand

I ask

you to continue this!pleaseplease!

Sooo cute :D aah i know a good continution:

The next day Denzel discovers that it was all a LIE!Tifa had let Cloud read it and begged Cloud to because Cloud liked him or anything.

Denzel is sooo shocked!He runs away to Aerith's church :D Cloud to the rescue!but Denzel doesn't want to go..

Cloud angry;angry sex!Denzel is traumatized!up to Cloud to help him!

too much drama?i like drama...but please continue this!it's good!

Id say Cloud is waaaay out of character. (Sorry!) There needs to be (and i cant believe im typing this) more angst. lol, i like how Tifa is bitchy cuz in other stories she's totally cool w/ CloudxDenzel. I think the next chapter there should be a fight over Cloud between her & Denzel. (Cloud can't be present, imo cuz it would ruin it .) X-mas lemony goodness instead of a book? Anyways, it's turning out well i think. I hope that helped!

it's a great story i love it hope you decide to continue it

kawaii :3

Can't stop thinking of Cloud as a pedophile now... damn!

Cute pairing but just.. just... *sigh*

Not very likely, to say the least.

wow... id never thought of putting those 2 together... it's actually a good couple THNX AWESOME FANFIC! xd

Needs more cowbell..er..chapters. Loved it so far, icanhazmoar?

-XD3

...I never considered this pairing before.

WHY DID I NEVER CONSIDER THIS PAIRING BEFORE! Dx

It's...so...cute...[/dies]

Seriously though, this was adorable

Hello! When I'v read your story I totaly fall for it and I would like it if you keep this story up for us 'cause I'm sure I'm not the only one who love this story!

well written i liked this