| Reviews for Deluded |
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DeletedAccount3498 chapter 1 . 8/17/2013 Really love this line, "shout his confidence loud enough, the whispers will die down and danger fade away like an old nightmare." There's some good imagery there, and helped me imagine the scene. |
AngelofDarkness1605 chapter 1 . 7/22/2010 Wow, I kinda blindly clicked on the link in your profile page without reading whom it was about; but before I read like two lines I just /knew/ it was Fudge. Great work! |
Expecting Rain chapter 1 . 3/28/2010 This line is a very accurate description of Fudge: "If he can close his eyes and shout his confidence loud enough, the whispers will die down and danger fade away like an old nightmare." Again, love the last sentence! |
xoxLewrahxox chapter 1 . 3/24/2010 AZ! -hugs- Wow!.. I am shocked! Seriously, that was absolutely amazing! Just so in character! and fantastically written! I don't know what to say really. Your English was perfect, the metaphors that you used were extremely effective.. Great work! Loved it! -Hugs again- |
Victory87 chapter 1 . 3/24/2010 Very very good :) |
Mrs Bella Riddle chapter 1 . 3/23/2010 Fudge he just does not get it does he. I do like the idea of an almost self fulfiling prophecy, that he starts believing it himself. I had never even realy considered him before |
Xx starlight-moon xX chapter 1 . 3/23/2010 I like this. It's a nice portrait of Fudge, desperate and clinging to whatever delusion keeps him safe and warm in the light, while Voldemort grows stronger and the wizarding world - the one he is supposed to be guiding and guarding - withers away. Nice work! :) |
singingofgallifrey chapter 1 . 3/23/2010 Again, this was very very well done. I very much LOVE your writing! You write every character in character if you know what i mean lolz. But this was wow. |