Very nice ! I thought of both Victoria and Maria, with a preference for Victoria given the details you let slip. But I had thought of the possibility of Jasper forced to go back to Maria. Thanks, I'll click "next" right away :)

WTAF!? SHE HAS TO DUE?!

I like your stories a lot, but I have to wonder if you have a Beta. Your lack of understanding of when to use "too" or "to" interrupts the flow of the story for me. I don't mean to come across as preachy, or like the word police or something, but it's very jarring. The way they are used is something like this. "She was going TO write TWO stories, TOO." And in case you have a problem with their, there and they're too, it's "THEY'RE going THERE to write THEIR stories." Otherwise, thank you for the interesting story lines. I'm enjoying them very much.

Who is this “HIM”

Beautiful!

I just finished reading this story for the second time and it's still entertaining. Thank you for sharing.

That was a fun story.

Nice to read a story once in a while where they don't have to worry about a greedy Aro trying to kill or force them into the guard.

Here is a rec. if you haven't read this story 's a J/B one with Peter and Char along for the ride. s/8194690/2/I-m-Still-Holding-On,it is funny as hell

So Bella handed the drama queen his balls back i see.

Damn!that boy is a bigger drama queen then Eddie ever was. poor,poor pitiful me no body loves me every body hates me i guess i'll just go eat worms. I hope she kicks his ass big time.

Yeah mister pity party Jasper will probably still be beating himself up about how unworthy he can be such a girl some times.

So curious to find out how Bree is the lynch pin to victory or to the resurrection of Bella since she must die to break the curse.

Well killing off the power blocker will help some i think.
Curious to see how Bella dies and still comes back that should be interesting to say the least.
Since Maria obviously has no gift i don't know how she has lived this long.

Alice needed her ass kicked and Carlisle needed to keep his mouth shut and not back Alice as usual.

Aro should have sent could have used his gift if they could catch Maria and her gifted vamps unaware then dismantle all of the older vamps in her compound.