SASUKE CAN GO JUMP IN LE LAKE! HOW DARE HE KILL ITACHIIIII

I don't get it, a plane?

Instantly ruined your story once you typed "Somewhere in Japan".

Dropped it like it was hot.

This book is amazing and I look forward to the next book.

Sigue

He can't just leave like that. He'll become a missing nin and hunters will have to hunt him down. XD

I honestly like the plot of this story and want to continue reading, but it has too many unexplained plot holes for my taste. Language barrier? Naruto wouldn't know English. How is Minato Carlisle's brother when he's supposed to be in his mid 400's? how would Naruto watch movies, when in the anime, they only have the basics? If you were to answer those questions, I would definitely continue. but for now, I apologize, and wish you good writing

KO

i like twilight and all but im just sayin bella named her daughter like a fuckin retard i mean seriously who names some renesme i might ave spelt itn wrong but u catch mi drift. Kudos on the sparkles comment from kurama though

yeah I likey. . . especially when you explained why the states x-overd to narutoverse :-)

Not that I don't like your story it is just that locations are just...so out of place I mean if there were Hidden Villages the Japanese government must have done something about that or is it something that I have not read that a huge genjutsu set up by the Sage of Six Paths hides the shinobi nations from the rest of the world.

Good story! The only substantial Naruto Twilight crossover *SALUTES AUTHOR* but the way you introduced or started the fic seemed bone jarringly out of place. No offense there could have been a smoother and more immersive way of doing that such as lets say that a vampire OC or due to some freak accident due to "vampire powers" a permanent portal to the ninja world was created blah blah blah. Nvm Good fic! :D

I really like the plot so far, but I couldn't help but sneer in disgust when Edward refered Naruto as "the poor angelic boy."

yes I read it and I love it XD

good