This is more like a rap song than a poem. I LOVE IT! You got mad talent!

The rhythm is jerky at best, but I like the feel you convey with this. _ Thanks for sharing.

Pretty good. Keep writing!

GC

hehe... Yami analysis... nice poem

Excellent. You have to write more. This is really good, if a little sad

Great job! This is different, i like it. Continue!

Hullo..do you like your poem? cuz I Do...but have to say, that for on e line you were missing a let's call it j'ai ne c'est qui? like..oh, i don't know.."you egg, you fry of trechery!" life is but a dream...hmm...feels like i'm wearing nothing at all, nothing at all...i'm not a pervert...i'm against R. Kelly. *thumbs up*

This is a great poem, you have a lot of talent! you should read my stories and r&r! c ya,

Yugi.

As far as I can tell, Yami Yuugi is one of the good guys, true, his meathods do get ruthless sometimes, but it's not like his enemies are pulling any stops.

very good! It seems more like a song then a poem, actually.

Oh, wow. That was really great! I love this poem... it's going in my favorites, even if for just a little bit. It's really wonderful! I wish you would write more YGO stuff. We could use another good poet writer like you!

That was very good! I hope you still keep on writing!

That woz great!

Wonderful poem!