Its great.. :3 Can I still hope that you'll update? T.T

Lust? ;D haha I love the first chapter! Hope you update soon! I can't wait for the next chapter~

So sweet it brought a tear to my eye... of course, Roxas is different, but that's the fun in it, being different and fun _

I like it, could you do gluttony next?, or maybe greed or lust?, I love the seven deadly sins, may the gods be with you, peace

I have to admit, I was kind of sceptical when I saw anger as the first chapter, as neither Roxas or Namine seem like 'angry' characters in the game, but I thought it was really good. You're a good writer, and they were really in character. I can totally see Namine locking herself in the bathroom. haha. good job

Jealousy. I know one of them was something related to Jealousy. I think the correct term is "Envy." It would be great; Roxas is jealous of Sora because he tries to get back together with Naminé( Sora isn't with Kairi yet. xD Let's say she comes at the end of the chapter as a new student ). Then the next chapter is "Pleasure." :D It was called Pleasure or Lust. I don't remember.

its good, save a couple grammatical errors. you could try a beta reader. i like the idea though, i wish i thought of it :(

and i cant wait to see how lust turns out XD

I love it I love it! :) Not too cheesy or corny! And the ending gave it a lighter touch...

I'm glad this sin wasn't too dark ;D I wasn't sure what to expect when I saw this was added for Four Colors of Love, haha.

I have no ideas for chapter two! But I hope you update son.

~Handwritten

Technically the correct term for this sin is Wrath, but anger clearly defines the traits to the sin . Anyway, I was browsing around and I found this story in your profile page! I could believe I missed this! Then again, I can't believe I don't have you in my author alert list! *hides in shame*

Anyway, let me starting reviewing my thoughts to this story :), well, at least for the first chapter .

Haha, Roxas would be the one we should focus on of the sin Wrath/or anger. Namine isn't that type of person who would get angry would she? :). Oh wait, scratch that, she's in the bathroom after all...which I'm sure is Roxas's fault for doing something stupid...and what do you know, it is! XD lol. I'm currently in a relationship like that; the guy not liking the term boyfriend, which is pretty understandable :). It's like a title that shouldn't be fond over, both couples should have a neutral understanding of their display of affection that shouldn't be judged as some type of irrelevance...besides a couple .

Roxas, you must learn, EVERY man isn't bright lol XD. OH! Namora reference! I spotted it! Haha! XD I couldn't help but to smile at that reference how she and Sora used to go out :). Hey D:! There's nothing wrong with talking about Disney movies Roxas! X(

Haha, Namine I don't know about you, but I would want Roxas to be Sora! XD Yes, I have a confession to make, as much as I LOVE Namixas, I actually do prefer Sora than Roxas...as a character though! Not for who should be with Namine ;D...even though Namora is cute :P.

Oh God Namine! XD Don't mention about your father when the two of you are about to kiss! Silly girl :3. Anyway, I REALLY like this! It's cute and interesting and it's nice to see someone writing about Namixas by using the sevenly deadly sins theme! :D It's about time too! :P

Anyway, as for the next sin you should write, I would say GREED; for one I think you're following the deadly sins to the plot of Namine and Roxas actually in a relationship that they're slowly working on. So, I think it would be cool to see a chapter on GREED. Why? Well, it struck me when you mentioned Sora in the story, which I think he would play really well with Roxas's feelings when it comes to wanting or keeping Namine to himself than to let him have her even though he was her previous lover. It's just a thought, you don't have to take it; for after all, it's your story ;D.

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I loved the ending line, especially, but the whole piece was marvelous.

Deadly sin...Lust or pride or jealousy?

LOVED it :) I think i'm swinging towards lust for the next chapter. not much of a surprise there though haha. maybe sloth though, that would be funny

update as soon as you can :)

Aww this is cute. :] Can't wait for the next update.

IS LUST A DEADLY SIN? O.O LOLOL.