Hey!
This story is really interesting; I hope you continue writing it
The story is well written, and with the setting you kind of feel like living the story.

había perdido las esperanzas de ver un nuevo capitulo.

Me encanta esta historia (Aunque yo no hable muy bien el ingles)

will you update any more?
love it!

please！pleasei want more
！！please updatelove your fic！

please update soon! (7)/-*-*

seguira escribiendo verdad. es una de mis historias favoritas

You still writing this?

that just made my day. I had almost abandoned all BoF stories and just happened to be back to read another one when I stumbled upon yours! I remembr reading all of your chapters and absolutely fell in love but when there were no updates I practically gave up. But now you're back! Well sorta...I'm looking forward to the next chapter!

~yamanana

WHEE! ~does happy dance~

Another ~two~ chapters. _ I need to get online more often. Never enough time in the day anymore :( All well. I'm glad that Ryu and Joachim have now teamed up with Nina and the others. This is making for an interesting read :)

Good chapter, though I was hoping for more "action", but oh well. Enjoyed reading this chap. Keep it up.

I like the way you express their instict, but i think Joachim (which i liked) and Ryu would question what the hell happened -.-

There a 5 guardians right? are they only protecting the Wyndians ? or there are more guardians for each country? Water is Cassandra, Yuri is Wind, Myn is Thunder, Yua is Dark, Ryu is Light(?) there is still Fire and Earth. Excluding Ryu from the guardians it would make 5 alright

update soon and happy weding(ugh that's so lame)

Yay you updated

Ryu is finally going to join Myn and the other's again ? i would like to see they interact with eachother

In response to the anon review, yes, this chapter is short, and yes, I understand the fight sequence does not make sense. This chapter litterally took two years to complete, and I really didn't want to do it. Something about it just wasn't clicking, so I made the decision to just publish it and move on. Chapter 20 is going a lot more smoothly.

There is a god ! and his name is awesome the might, i almost jumped of the floor when i saw this thing updated, i did not even read it but i know it will be good

I've figured out your code (at chapter 13 right now).

Chapter five's intro says:

Ycbhomy uieh arryh jsocy.

Syt at jsiv saky tny zolt lyol.

Msoac tny lkayl ar uieh ohcl.

Ord tnhiegn Nyozyr lnoss uie hoar!

The last word "hoar" should be: "hyagr".

Embrace your inner flame.

Let it flow like the vast seas.

Claim the skies in your arms.

And through heaven shall you reign!

(You have rain instead of reign.)