| Reviews for Eve Stares, Shivers, and Attempts to Understand |
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   Mimi Bobimi chapter 1 . 9/9/2010 Very nice. Eve is a favorite character of mine, and I've always seen Dallas as redeemable, not just some lowly scumbag. I like the way you portrayed both characters here. The narrative flowed well throughout the story. Job well done! |
| RageFeline chapter 1 . 6/13/2010 That was a really sweet story. I like how you kept them in character and how your 3rd person managed to smoothly get into Eve's head. I really like your writing style! |
| i'm not ulysses chapter 1 . 5/1/2010 Omgosh, this is amazing. I loved every bit of it! The description and precise wording were phenomenal. It's nice to see Dallas in a good light seeing as he's always bad-mouthed. I love it! Thanks for writing this! (: |
