This story is so cool ! I love everything in it. The race in the forest and the feeling of freedom, are too beautiful. And I like how Yugi fights to be with Yami. And also Mai is really great when she talks to Atem. I like him to be nice at the end. And... yeah Ishizu is a real bitch.

But I realy love everything in this story, is so good! Thank you

Congrats with thismstory for it is one of the only ones were I could not predict what happens. I was scared to read this because I feared how it wouod end; howevrr, you have exceeded expectations, and I love it. I am forever happy that I read this even if it gave me a heart attack because I didnt know what was going to happen at all.

squeal please what happens next does ishizu come after atem find a mate please write a squeal itssuch a good story.

i loved it. i basically cried with the thought of yugi being banished and never to see yami again. all my life i loved werewolves. you have outdone yourself. i might ask you if you have any tips on what kind of story i should write.

Thank you ever so much, I loved it!

I lov it sequel ?

I like the hunt in this. I did see a tiny bit of a shipping between Mai and AAtem, but it might be just my imagination or something.

As a comment to the a/n, I love futerama, it's a really funny show. I do add referiences to that in my story...and south park.

I like how you characterized Mai in this.

Damn. I feel sorry for Yami and Atem in this.

I find it cool that you made Bakura, Malik, and Joey werewolves in this. Because I can see that happening. I like how you added Mahad in this too. I'm curious to see if Mana is in this too.

Also, my bff, Youngbountygirl, and I are writing a colaberation story called out for blood if you want to check it out. It's twilight except it's far less stupid and it has little romance in it. It's also my first attempt at thrid person too. lol

well you actually got me to like Mai again nicely done Lauren now I dont hate her as badly anymore but Atemu I swear boy grow a brain then a heart please obviously you left them behind some where and it allowed your pride to turn into a monster and Ishizu could ya please stop plant those pretty pink lips on Atemu's ass so much sheesh are you his priestess or are you his freakin concubine you live to suck his cock physically and metephorically ah well loved this story hun keep up the superb job gtg JA NE

*Cue mega ultra fangirl squeal* Teenie! This is amazing! *Glomps* I love it!

This story is amazing, as said before. I love the characterization of the characters, especially Mai. Damn, she was amazing. XD I knew Yugi would end up victorious. I just never expected it to be so awesome!

Aww, we bully Ishizu so much. *Shrugs* Oh well, it's better than Anzu or Vivian. I just feel bad since she was programmed to believe she needed to make the Alpha/Beta happy.

And Atem, don't get me started on him! *Bangs Atem over the head with a frying pan* Bad, Atem, bad! I'm glad Mai talked to him, but jeeze! *Bangs Atem over the head again*

That was awesome the way Yugi won! Never thought he'd do that. XD I knew he was going to win though, hands down.

Oh, and may I say how much I love Mai? I adore her. *Huggles Mai* She's amazing, badass, and not afriad to stand up against anyone. The friendship/budding romance between Atem and Mai is very well done. I wouldn't be surprised if she was queen one day.

There is one mistake though that I'd thought I'd address. Growing up, (he) father had made it clear the only thing... You ust forgot the R though, which is fine.

Hope to see more soon, my Yami! *Huggles*

Man, I love this story. Even if you do say it was a cliche Werewolf fic, I still love it and had fun reading it. The characters were portrayed perfectly and the idea is amazing. I really did enjoy this fic and I completely love it.

loved it

Love it! You should make a sequal! Like maybe going back in the past and showing how Yugi and Yami met? Great story!

well that was certainly suspensful and entertaining! If only you could have seen me reading the third chapter! i was practically running around the room and screaming! haha but very good story, I enjoyed it a lot. :)