| Reviews for Out of Order |
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  Guest chapter 1 . 5/11 Ooo~ la la~ spicy..! |
| Randomness chapter 1 . 8/12/2018 Ahem... I do wonder about how this is your first lemon if you're already this good at them... So... erm... PLEASE TEACH ME YOUR SECRET! |
| Nalu chapter 1 . 4/1/2017 Awesome |
 Hall of Rune chapter 1 . 12/26/2016 The concept is interesting and wholly enticing. The perfect little tie-in at the end is just right to spur on...future adventures. Brava - this absolutely delicious interlude between the two was well-executed. |
| Cocoloco233 chapter 1 . 8/26/2016 AAAAAnd then thay tried with out a condom and had 34456320 babies and got maried and lived happily ever after! |
| Nalu is life1 chapter 1 . 6/16/2016 please write another chapter |
| The Unicorn chapter 1 . 2/24/2016 I fucking refuse to believe that this is your first fanfic! You did such a great job, I'm breathless. Hehe and it sure did make me horny ;) |
| FanFicFanatic chapter 1 . 8/21/2015 LOL, THAT WAS GREATTT! XD |
| Twishadowhunter chapter 1 . 8/18/2015 That was hot |
| Teamleo565 chapter 1 . 4/20/2015 That was perfect |
| April-Dragneel chapter 1 . 11/28/2014 I love the detail. I felt awakward feeling myself watching them. Make more. You played their characters very well too! |
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/7/2014 I LUUUV LONG LEEEMONS |
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/31/2014 the hck |
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/17/2014 Ew |
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/2/2014 Natsu da breast-man! And he has some smart logic, you gotta admit, fellow fan-girls! |
