Awwww. Sweet, simple. I liked it

I enjoyed this several back when I first read this adorable fic and I now find that I still like this story just as much. Such a cute fluffy story. Nicely written. Check out my Drarry fluff at this site.

I just wanted to thank you again for this. It is so lovely ...I'm a little tear eyed it so wonderful. Thank you again.

All my love!

Wheezy D

First I wanted to say, that I do really like this one shot. But it is not a Harry/Draco fanfiction. It is an original story and you should change the names and put it on

It's not Harry/Draco, because they aren't in character. There is no magic and no explanation for why there is no magic. There is also not an explanation for why they are in America, since that is the only country you could own a Ford truck in. There is nothing in this story at all that would suggest that is a fanfiction of anything.

I'm not saying this because I don't like Harry/Draco in the muggle world. I really like AU fics and stories that show them as muggles. I just like a little back story explaining it. Since this is just a little one shot, it doesn't need a back story for the characters at all. That's why it works so well as an original story. It could be any two boys in the world, but it is not Draco or Harry. They are predefined characters with specific characteristics that aren't present in this story.

...and then he told me he loved me again, and i told him i loved him, and he said he loved dmh, and i told him i did, too, and then rae said that she wanted to get in on the action, and then we...

i love this.

wow.

cute.

wow.

f***ing cute.

YAY!

I'm happy now- which means I need to do the dishes- damn...

But yay!

AND I reviewed, fully literate you see, I can both read AND write!

(can you tell I have a bee in my bonnet today for people who can't hit the review button-ne?)

but yeah- it was sweet and I loved it!

To the kitchen away!

x

AWSOME! I LOVED IT!

God, that was awesome. Makes me want to hop in the truck and go searching through the feilds for the gay guys shagging in secret :D

Of course, this propably won't be good for my sanity during harvest, but it was totally worth it :P

Aw, I love it! :')

Bless, Harry being all inexperienced and nawh :3 -squishes them-

xx

I love it :)

Very very very good. I happened to read this by chance and gotta day I really enjoyed it.

love the humor at the end.

you totally just made my day... thank you :)

Oh! This was so sweet! The best 'first time' fic i've ever read :)

Sweeter than what I usually go for but I think you pulled this off really nicely. And a happy birthday to your friend!

I have no idea why I'm crying but I am. Thank you so much Chikita my love. You are such an AMAZING writer ...I am so excited to see where you will take your wonderful talented.

So much love you don't even know.

Wheezy D