So...cute...

I like your perspective of a zombieverse. And I also like that you never call them zombies in the story. It lets the reader draw their own conclusion, and also seems...kinder to Rorschach and Jacky. They may be part zombified, but they still have very human feelings and thought processes. Considering how Rorschach turning into a zombie could have taken a very dark turn, I like the humor in this story, with this line especially making me laugh:

"It's horrible, though. 'cept for Cindy and Jason, all the other kids are scared of me."

"That is not a bad thing."

And Dan's burying his face in his hands behind them, shaking his head in horror and amusement both at once.

I always love seeing stories where Rorschach interacts with children, and this one was especially cute. It was very heartwarming to see Rorschach and Jacky relating to each other.

It was very good.

I agree with the others, you portray Dan, Hollis, and Rorschach's characteristic's beautifully, and amusing- because though your piece reflects a serious tone, it's quite funny. I also love Rorschach interaction with Jacky, you play it off well, in a golden way. Please write more? O.O

If anybody can understand abused kid's heart, it's Rorschach.

This one always makes me smile like the dope I am. Rorschach-kid interactions make me feel fuzzy and warm inside. :3