Wow... that was interesting. You should make some sort of sequel :)

I remember reading this a ways back. It still makes me want to both cry and smile! I love it.

Pretty good story. A few spelling errors from what I could see, mostly mix-ups of homynyms. Also, the lemon at the end was kind of rushed, and it didn't seem like you were confident with writing it.

Other than that it was good, and I hope you continue writing, because it didn't seem like this fic was done, even if it was marked as "completed".

Yaaaaay! You updated! Because I just love this story, and I was waiting for long to continue reading this. Too bad it's the last chapter. I still like this story though. :)

I would have been mad buuuut the lemon you wrote got rid if that quickly!XD good job but during the lemon you mispelled faster with 'haster' other than that you had pretty good spelling and grammar!XD BYE BYE!XD

Have I told you yet that I LOVE this story? I enjoy it so much. It's sweet and enticing to continue to read! *huggles* I also LOVE no ADORE Neji/Gaara pairing! *purrs and floats about on a cloud of hearts*

*eagerly nibbles upon cheek while reading* OMG I am so happy I finally told myself to read this story! I am now engulfed by this story and would love to see an update! *huggles*

Poor Neji, his happiness will come shortly! 3

Hope you update soon! I do understand all about having short chapters. I write really short chapters..

Anyway, it was really good. Can't wait for more!

Damn I hope Neji will be ok, can't have him getting injured really bad, now can we!*pouts*

I like it! I'm curious how the characters develop after they go to the sand village. I can't wait for Gaara's debut.