| Reviews for I Remember |
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kidfurry02 chapter 34 . 6/20 Bro. Buddy pls. I need updates and I need them now |
Erkl chapter 34 . 6/28/2018 Don't know if this is discontinued or not, but I've read to chapter 34 and very much enjoyed the story. I love the idea of two souls suffering from deep sorrow who find comfort in each other. You captured it nicely. I've read a review below stating Harry and Fleur are erratic and their relation isn't convincing, but I disagree. Fleur as a recent widow, orphan, someone who lost a dear sister(in a horrible way) and to top it off her baby, her drastic mood swing and harsh words are understandable. I guess the name of the story, 'I remember,' means Harry and Fleur remembering their mutual true feelings before obliviation? If that is so, than I think it would be a lovely story. Loved your story so far. Hope it continues. |
Erkl chapter 32 . 6/28/2018 I think the reasoning for obliviating each other is not that much convincing. It just seems it's for the sake of creating more drama to the story. Nevertheless I do enjoy your writing. The way you write Harry and Fleur's conversation is so good and it is a joy to read. |
Erkl chapter 20 . 6/27/2018 Kind of creepy how the dead keep on observing Harry and Fleur. Since they didn't choose to become ghosts I think they should just get going on to their 'next great adventure'. Especially meeting the living in dreamland is.. I think it doesn't serve anything to the story. It hinders Harry and Fleur to move on; the dead are basically haunting them in their sleep. I appreciate your creativity, but for me the beauty of these kind of 'story of survivors' is the living moving on by themselves. The dead should just remain as a memory, nothing more. |
proftheories chapter 34 . 1/16/2018 I'm assuming that even though it's been over a year since your last update this story isn't finished? I sure hope so.. |
G E Proctor chapter 1 . 8/10/2017 This is such a lovely story, truly well written. With a tragic beginning, the loss they both faced. I've really enjoyed reading every bit of it. |
alivevalkyrie chapter 34 . 7/7/2016 if this not harry and fleur,then why the fuck didn't you add that this a harry/oc of time |
alivevalkyrie chapter 4 . 7/7/2016 officially,this sucks..bill never deserved fleur because he is nothing but a weasel...terry also is a worst of space character.. I'm out... waste of time story |
ryanyz10 chapter 34 . 7/7/2016 I cringed when they Obliviated each other. Why?! But great story and great writing! |
ProCaptured chapter 34 . 7/7/2016 Interesting story. Your writing is really good. Although I do think it was very lazy of you to use the memory charm as a plot device in your story so that Fleur and Harry could wish away their problems. I would like Harry to go back to England to face Voldemort. I think that would be interesting to read. And towards the end was that a hint of multi pairing. Hmmm, Interesting. |
Aggrandize chapter 1 . 7/6/2016 Helios is not Gaia's brother. He's like her grandson. |
dave7x7 chapter 34 . 7/6/2016 Thanks for the update. I really love this story |
IMDSTiNe47 chapter 25 . 3/13/2016 This has been an interesting story so far. Building off the apocalyptic setting of alternate universe Deathly Hallows to tell a story about two survivors who have lost their whole lives. It has been well told so far with you taking time to develop the characters and show their struggles in the face of devastating loss. However, last chapter and into this one I strongly disliked your handling of the conflict between Fleur and Harry. Here is an explanation of what I read: In Ch. 24, Harry gives up. From a combination of low moral, helplessness, lingering depression, and a typical "I'm not good enough for those I care about" complex, all of which sprung up suddenly, Harry contemplates moving on. When confronted by Fleur, who has been (understandably) in a bad depression and has been somewhat taking it out on Harry, he tells her what has been troubling him, but phrased in terms that are clearly about his own uncertainties and insecurities rather than hers. She, however, first responds not by correcting his misconceptions or reassuring his insecurities like the caring, reasonable person she usually is, but by castigating him for reconsidering his life in ways that affect her. She then storms off without giving him a chance to say anything. On being forcefully awoken the next morning being attacked and knocked unconscious by a wolf (who he didn't recognize to be Remus), the consensus between the two is that Harry should be ashamed of himself for abandoning her (which he didn't actually go through with) and that he entirely deserves to be reviled by Fleur (again, when he didn't actually do anything besides have doubts). And following all of that unwarranted drama, they spontaneously resume their usual half-hearted banter with brief apologies tacked on. I don't enjoy reading clumsily handled relationship drama that appears from nowhere, explodes spectacularly with no attempt to communicate about the problem, and then disappears with disproportional speed and drama to the size of the problem. Please try to write these characters less erratically; if they are going to suddenly be out of character, show the build up to it and explain why; let a conflict linger at times, show the awkwardness following one, and don't portray conflicts as so one sided unless they actually are. Usually, both people are at fault to a large degree. I want to be clear that I am not condemning your writing. My hope is that you understand what I am criticizing even if you don't agree, and that you will take the time to consider if my remarks are reasonable. Thank you for sharing your writing and considering my remarks, DOMUnspeakable |
Guest chapter 33 . 2/23/2016 Please, this is one of the best FF of HP/FD i ever read, even english is not my first language, i want to know if you would continue this ? |
HaywireEagle chapter 1 . 1/28/2016 mangled, not mingled. More errors and the like in need of correction. |