I like your story minus a few typos, the only problem I have with it is your POV's needs work. When you do Katsuya or Seto's POV it's suppose to be from that persons point of view not from a third persons point of view.

No one ruins Seto Kaiba's chance at mornning sex and gets away with it! Lmfao at that line! XD

ROTFL! that very end part with Mokuba was hilarious, it was such a hot fic.

Me like.

Sooo... Joeys been sexually abused all his life, but as soon as hes safe from it, he goes and has sex with kaiba? Its a bit messed up, but actually a pretty good story. x

Wow, if I didn't know better (which I don't) I would say that this was either a firsthand experience or ur just a really talented author! I don't mean to impose but, I found sum errors in spelling and such, would you like me to beta this?

This was pretty good for your first fic,sure there were minor mistakes but your writings good. I sort of thought the plot was a bit rushed but for your first you did great

Ow, I'm glad is your first fanfic because is one of SxJ!

I like it, it's really good, although Seto Kaiba is... a little bit sweet, don't you think? He's more cold. Anyway, really good fanfic! (Y) Keep writing!

That was superb! This is my fav coupling and it was, uh, i cant even describe it in words *as i tend to do with every great fanfic i read*! I think you you should make this a longer fic, your writing is really good and there are a ton of plot twistes and other things you could put in later chapters if you do so. Either way that was great!

Oh kami! This story is a masterpiece! A true work of art! It was so short, which normally puts me off, but the summary was just too good to pass up! I admit that I found both characters to be a little more than OOC, but it was still wonderous! It has actually helped give me some inspiration for a story I'm writing, so thank you very much kami-sama (yes, that's you, you're my God)!

This is so FLUFFLY CUTE!

"The kid is so full of energy. I wonder where he gets it all from."-LOL!

"When was the last time you had a decent meal pup? You sound like you're starving" Kaiba said jokingly. (My eyes widened at this part. Well, what day is it NOW? *mentally makes Katsuya-papa's head explode*)

"Hmm, I think it was Wednesday afternoon when the gang shared some of their lunches with me" Joey answered seriously. (My eyes just widened again and my mouth transformed into an O shape. WTF?)

"Gosh Joey you act like no one feeds you!" (Now I see why it might be embarassing for Seto-sama...)I'm glad Kaiba is concerned, though!

"Alright Joey, I'm really glad you're staying with us, you already seem to be making Seto much happier!" (Me too!)

The ending was cute! Get Mokie! LOL!

Maibe: I liked it

Magdalene: Yami you like anything that starts with hurt and ends in LEMON

Maibe: True very true and for Puppyshipping this was AMAZINGLY WRITTEN!

Magdalene: Have you been eating sugar again?

Maibe: (tries hiding chocolate) Maybe...

Thanx for all the reviews everyone! I know there are some spelling errors which i may correct in the future, sorry about the tenses it's a problem of mine that i can never really control in any of my writing EVER!

JOEYXSETO FOR LIFE FOR SURE!

re-reading my story now i have to skip over the abuse part it hurts me too much. is that strange?

I hopw to write more soon but am very lazy so we'l see

Hey, Great story! I was always a major seto yugi fan but after reading this I can't see seto with anyone aside from Joey! The story was super cute

(and the lemon was really good)-lol not being a perv

so over all great job :)

Despite this being fairly cheesy, I enjoyed it.