This story is so amazingly written i love it, you should post the next chapter soon please this story is way to good to abandon.

make more these r getting goooood

I love how sweet Lockdown is being to Prowl. Please continue

Please continue

THAT-WAS-AWSOME! but pleas but some drtiy long sex in the next

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAWSSSSSSSOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOMEEEEEEEEEEEEE!

LET THEM HAVE THE SPARLKLING

Will they make the youngling?

Whats next, whats next?

I hope your going to update this soon! Its essential to my existence that I know what's going to happen to Prowl :P

Overall, well written and good pairing choice. I love Prowl and Lockdown together :)

Keep on rocking it!

This is getting really good! Granted, a few typos here and their but otherwise splendid! Please update! I hope Prowl won't remain a cripple for ever. Actually,...that'd be kinda cool if Lockdown found him having a nightmare and mumbling about being crippled. Please update soon!

Nice fic you have going so far You have a lot of typos and gramatical errors though... Like sometimes character names are capitalized and sometimes they're not. Names are always capitalized. I'm really not aiming to make this be a flame. It's not because I do enjoy what I've read. All I think that, as a reader, you should put a little more time and effort in proofing something before you post. It makes reading a lot more enjoyable than what it already is

PROTOFORM! At least that's what I think it is. Please continue this! If your stuck, feel free to drop me a PM. I would be more than happy to help.

Uhhh WHY AM I SCARED TO KNOW WHY LOCKDOWN ASKED ABOUT SEEING A YOUNGLING!

Update, I WANNA KNOOOOOOW

This is great can't wait to read more