Haha omg the end is just so funny! You story was really amazing. I find it too bad there aren't a lot of Switch's fanfiction... I really liked yours. Thank you for this wonderful story!

Why end?! Why!? Sequels please! I love your story so much and HalxKai is my otp ohohoho #sorry# and yes im a fujoshi, please make more good story!

Sorry for my bad English though. ..and my grammar, im really bad at it...im very sorry

The cafe scene was wonderful and Kai obviously is the one on bottom.

I just cried with this!

Amazing story, author-san! I don't hate King and other OCs at all, they've done their role just well.
And i don't expect Rena's appearance at the forest, and the ending too! Haha, she's cute!
Thank you for writing this

-Amusuk

omg, sweep away people just like that? Ouch...
Nice chapter!

i-i don't expect to see the rated scene, but aside of that, you write smut well. Hehe

why did i just read it now? It's freakin' amazing story.
I cry reading King's past T.T poor sibling loosing memory, ah my feels...

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I will just comment to say... I really like your story, I LOVE it I know it's complete but keep on with the good writing

Also i read your profile and i had to say... OMGOSH YOU COSPLAYED NAI! I also did that once but no one knew him and it was so sad and no one knew the manga either (of course) and everything was so stupid ;w; You just became my god because now i really love you *bows* I will make an alter(not sure this is english or danish) of you and pray to you and make cookies to you everyday! May the love of Karneval grow3

I it!

Yesterday I saw the OVAS for first time, and today I'm trying to read the manga...

I fell in love of these two! :D

They're just so fucking cute together!

I really like your fic, I read it in one day!

And certanly, even if King is the bad guy, I like him anyway. He was soo... fantastic, being all misterious and smart; and vulnerable and loving as he did... I love him! You really did it, you created the perfect antagonist, a perfect mix of evil (the most part) and love. (Why the bad guys are always so sweety, deep inside? You can't stop loving them!)

Am I wrong or the last note said "The End" ?(Because you didn't put the ' ' around the words... Or is there any second part?

And I loved the kind of relationship you make with these two. Kai being all inocent, and Hal just trying leverage that...xDDD

Anyway, this was fantastic! (Why there are so few of Switch histories? :( )

To favoritess!

Kisses!

PS- Sorry for my bad English...I'm from Argentina and I'm just learning.

Akira-san I give u my utter most praise, I'm a HUGE fan of yaoi smut manga or writing and I try but I don't think I'm doin it quite right. this has nothing to do with the story but in an authors note u said ur boyfriend called u gay for ur black nail polish... Are u gay? Sorry if it's to personal and on another note, THIS WAS AMAZING! The story line was great but I hadn't finished switch and u said Kia was the key to it -_- such a spoiler. Well u could already see it coming so it's fine - O and I wish u luck on ur other stories they r awesome I will read all of ur fanfictions that I've read the manga to or seen the anime :D ps uryour BUGGY BYE BYE

Ironic, since in Asia, strawberries represent an innocent love...

Oh no, this LAST chapter was indeed satisfying.

Again, I had to stop myself from squealing because my mother is right beside me or rather across my in our living room table.

I love you and the sex scenes. Hal is soooo...I can't say it.

LONG LIVE TO YOU AND YOUR FANFIC...this is the most beautiful and well written (even though there are some minor mistakes) that I've read so far.

I'm happy I get to read it before my mother would suspect me of watching/reading hardcore yaoi again.

well, well, well. this chapter's KINKY. *giggles*

boy, I gotta miss King. I sure would.

but OMG! the hospital sex...my goodness. good thing I didn't laugh or squealed or else my mother would suspect me of watching hardcore yaoi again. I don't like that happening again.

THIS story is..GOOD

I actually laugh at this part...Hiki is, like, a matchmaker. I guess he noticed it and since no one would make a moved, he just played cupid...(I also pair Hiki with who was it...Kaji, right? his name was Kaji? oops I said it. XD)

and that part about King's brother...I have to say..my heart ached. It was so sad...more sadder if that disease does exist...well sort of I guess..I friend of mine, wait no, a frenemy of mine said that he had a disease (or whatever he calls it) that has a resemblance to Alzheimer's disease..or so he says because he forgets things (names,etc.) in a few days or so...it made me sad in the inside though even though he pisses me off and on top of that...HIS HALF ENGLISH. and I just realize he is like King..because this frenemy of mind...has a brother only his parents were divorced. sigh...OMG that was kinda creepy..I just realize it just now.

okay..change topic...that sex scene of Kai and Hal...oh God it was cool. no, not cool...hot! I hope it's not the only sex scene in here. Oh God you're so cool..I LOVE YOU!