I really enjoyed reading this story. I hope you will somehow continue adding to the story because I want to see what you come up with next.

Hah! Finally!

I wish this were cannon! This makes me like the characters, namely Kenny! Even more! Seriously, now I want him to come back in the series with Dawn! I miss them both!

On a side note: This has been bugging me but I like to ask, Whatever happened to the Jenny that arrested Ash and Misty? Did she ever get punished for wrongly arresting them? I mean, she only thought it was them because she saw a video of the crooks wearing their clothing, and that was it! She had no other evidence, so she had no right to arrest them over that video! I have a few family members that are/were in the force, so I know that Jenny handled the situation badly! Not to mention the police treated Ash and Misty just horribly! I mean I know they were just doing their jobs but come on, they were way to harsh, way to rough, and I recall that they hurt the two of them I think? Not to mention publicly humiliating them on TV as criminals! It's a miracle that they weren't branded! If this were real life, Jenny and the police under her authority would of been arrested and stripped of their ranks.

You know...that makes me wonder if Paul will ever be arrested, considering how he abuses his pokemon, and abandons them...that has to have repercussions right? Right?

Well moving on, I can't wait for the next chapter! I feel like a kid reading this! Until then, good luck!

You should've made Jenny feel bad for not understanding the problem.

I'm cackling at the idea of Team Rocket betting on Ash's love life.

Can't imagine how they'd have reacted to Serena screwing Misty (and them) over a couple of years from now...

I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE REST!Pl

Dude! Such an amazing chapter. I don't review here often, and that's honestly because I don't read too many fics nowadays (hypocritical, I know), but after seeing your review I had to come over and see the work you've done on your story. This is incredible. I need to go back and reread from the start, but just reading your latest chapter, it's clear to see how much you've grown and matured as a writer. Your dialogue is a lot of fun to read and flows seamlessly between characters - I really appreciate that in an author; of fanfic, or otherwise!

Have a good one, man, and keep up the awesome work!

Barry meets mistys mallet

Having read most of this story... I'll go out on a limb and say Dawn's future Togekiss is Misty's ex Togetic.

Someday ash will get a riolu

Okay, technically Ash never made a bet. All he said was for Barry to find his own girlfriend so that he could leave him and Misty alone. He never said that he couldn't get a girlfriend, and he had no idea that Barry would go straight for Dawn. Sorry, but in my eyes, Misty is the one who was at fault here.

Aww man, I was hoping to see more than a hug with Lyra and Khoury. Well, I guess you can't get everything you wish for.

Also, poor Kenny.

Meowth: well at less things cant any worse
Jessie: oh no james look at our pokemon
*seviper and carnivine are shown to be love with each other*
James: now isnt the time to be all lovey dovey you two

I would like to see another appearance of Cassidy and butch