Reviews for Her Prince
April Evans chapter 2 . 5/23/2010
Well that was very mean. Oh yeah it was Tom Riddle(A.K.A Lord Voldermort.) though. So I think you made Tom Riddle what he would have done if he was at the scene. Well Done, More!
Schermionie chapter 2 . 5/9/2010
Oooohhh! Nice continuation - thank you so much! I love the different tone it took to the first chapter, which was very much a fairytale in places. Lovely lovely lovely.

I thought it was a great idea to have Tom capitalise on Myrtle's devotion to him; he completely fooled her until the end, when he could not longer control her. Just as things would go. I got a little confused at the ending and had to read it twice - did you mean that Myrtle launched herself at Tom to hug him? But other than that I understood it and the errors weren't that noticeable, for not being beta'ed it's fantastic.

Thank you so much for a wonderful birthday gift! I'm really happy with it, thank you.
opaque-girl chapter 1 . 5/8/2010
Its hard to write a one-shot featuring a kiss-in-the-rain. Most of the people would end up failing horribly at the characterizations making Tom all in love with Myrtle, but the way you portrayed it was very realistic and for that applaud to you! *Claps*
22orphan.accounts chapter 1 . 4/2/2010
Aw! Smart, truly. And perfectly written;)
Smile Life Away chapter 1 . 3/29/2010
Very nice. You took the prompt and interpreted it in a different way. It was very creative and rather enjoyable. I liked how Tom saw it as something he dreaded doing while Myrtle saw it as a romantic kiss. Loved it :)
selemi chapter 1 . 3/29/2010
hehehe i can so imagine mrytle doing that...
hotgirlwizard chapter 1 . 3/22/2010
Loved it. The idea was so original.
Schermionie chapter 1 . 3/21/2010
Oh, lovely. I like how it wasn't romantic in a love sense... but Myrtle found it so because of the 'beautiful' image of Tom and the sun behind him. My favourite line would be: "He had to save her, there were witnesses, and he would be praised." So short, yet packed to the brim with character development.

Very interesting fic, and I love the pairing.