Really interesting.

I actually believe that Vader will be the one to end Ahsoka's life.

It just seems fitting that way.

I like how you gave Vader just a bit of a conscience, because realistically, it takes time for someone to completely change their character, and it wouldn't make sense for him to lose it completely as soon as he turns Sith. Great job, I enjoyed it! :)

Cool story hmm...(lol you unsepectingly killed my character even though this story came before mine ;) he was a Togruta and he has blue eyes but he's a little older than Ahsoka (acually he's close to Anakin's age) but nevermind about Zach, This is so mystriyous what if she did turn? It's a strong possibiltiy, one that others have concidered before...she shares his attitude, and quick thinking, sorry I'm rambling again arn't I? Really, great story! _

I wonder . . . .

I look forward to reading more of your work.

That was really good

I loved it

You should do a story about Vader looking for Ahsoka, or one about what happened to her and why she was sent away

Thanks for writing it