Reviews for Through the Eyes of Death
Guest chapter 1 . 7/6
in other words this is nothing but GODDAMN CANNON fuck you if you can write an oginnal tail that deviates form the source quit writing otherwgiise whats the point in writing FANfic to start?
Natsu-Dragneel 210803 chapter 3 . 6/7
Isn't mikoto kushina's best friend why would she hate Naruto
the Lady Scribe chapter 1 . 5/5
just saw that guest ahole in the reviews, ignore them if they didn't like they didn't have to read. I however really love this story & hope you continue it one day or allow someone to adopt it
Guest chapter 1 . 3/28
it was awsome
FlowersBite chapter 8 . 3/21
I feel like Naruto is getting the shit end of the stick, everyone is craping on him. He doesn't even have the one unique skill of seeing and hearing dead people to himself since apparently Saskue can hear his dead relatives as well. I like the idea of this story but honestly I am going to give it two more chapters and if Naruto hasn't gotten some strength, is able to show his true self and not the joker, or someone on his side then I am not finishing.
pain17ification chapter 23 . 2/25
Interesting concept, but there were a few things I dislike.

For starters, you portray Mikoto as some prideful woman who blames Naruto for something. Basically, you took the "stuck-up Uchiha" cliche that Fanfiction invented and made that into her persona; with a dash of "overprotective mommy"...
Next, you made Kakashi REALLY act like an asshole in this story. Sure, he was a sarcastic ass at first, but sometimes you make him come off almost malicious or spiteful. It's off-putting...
Lastly, you only had 3-4 ghosts act respectful/supportive/helpful to Naruto out of the possible hundreds he's come across. Is it that hard to have more of them be at least CIVIL with him? You gotta find a balance, or else his unique ability comes off as a curse; which would be a shame because this is a good idea...

Anyway, I know this hasn't been updated in years, but I just read it now and felt the need to express my thoughts.
Loveless Demon chapter 1 . 1/13
This is honestly one of the most interesting concepts I've seen done in a Naruto fic. He knows whats to come in the future and doesn't run headlong into stuff like an idiot as well, good use of what he's learned. Can't wait to see where this goes.
halleberry1995 chapter 23 . 12/7/2019
Awesome is there more?
Brandon Boodoo chapter 1 . 9/16/2019
soooo you didn't bash iruka because...? The dude LITERALLY told Naruto he can't be a genin because he can't make a clone when he made a FUCKING MIZU bunshin and then called him a Liability to his teammates.
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Yet you don't bash him and fire him from teaching because he couldn't understand that Naruto had too much chakra and you made your story all happy and lovey dovey childish because...?
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If you are going to put such retarded thinking up on websites for others to read please at least fix your plot holes.
Paul Lenzen chapter 23 . 9/5/2019
This is really good I hope you update eventually.
MysticRising chapter 3 . 7/4/2019
Oh i like obito. He's such a good ghost, unlike the fuckers in the uchiha clan. Pity naruto can't eat them or exorcise the bastards.
ShnabS chapter 6 . 5/8/2019
It's pretty much pathetic.
Monster King chapter 23 . 4/9/2019
Great job please continue
TC chapter 9 . 3/31/2019
These dead uchiha annoy me...
reyesrachel805 chapter 23 . 3/21/2019
Habra continuacion?
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