aw prussia you care so much

aw the pool scene is . .FLUFFY.

aw why you always tease prussia XD

i agree with Ontario
not cool Quebec

aw stepdad ;-;

America children should have been there. You also laying the whole American forgets his brother just way too thick. It became not funny at all and more of chore to read through, but other wise this is a good story.

I'm am so happy about Quebec character, he is perfect! Je suis québécoise faique je suis vraiment heureuse de voir ma province dans tout ses stereotype (meme si c la vérité). I really love your job! :D

YESSSSSSSSSS

Ksesesesesese! I loved this story so much! Family fluff with Prussia and the Canadians is adorable and you did a good job on it. And so funny! At times it seemed like by bringing Prussia in, Canada had gained another kid.

Ksesesesesese! Leafs bashing! Our true national sport! Even Canadians who have no idea how to play hockey participate.

And oh, how oblivious can the States be? NHL- national hockey league. Not international hockey league. National as in one country. And since the Stanley Cup was meant to be presented to "the most deserving team in the Dominion of Canada..." We're not the 51st state, they're the 14th province.

Ksesesesesese! Prussia meets two more little cockblocks... I mean provinces. And New Brunswick's Frenglish! He talks just like one of my friends from grade eight.

Ksesesesesesese! "It's October; the ice cream parlour's closed." Something you only hear in Canada. I have a few friends from the States and they can't believe you can't just walk in to Farquar's or what have you in the middle of the winter. Then again, not many of them have been here during the winter.

Ksesesesesese! Poor Prussia, can't handle a simple Canadian summer pastime. He still has a lot to learn about being Canadian. Just wait Preussen; next time we'll take you out to the woods to pick wild blueberries in Northern Ontario.

In this chapter I noticed some plot holes. Wasn't this supposed to happen after Olympic Fever? Because in Olympic Fever Québec and Ontario already seem pretty chummy with Gilbert but here AFTER everything in Olympic Fever is when Gil meets Vincent and JP. Other than that I really LOVE LOVE LOVE the story 3

That was awesome and well written and I love Canada's kids. They are perfect.