Oops...this review is 6 days late.

Anyway, I like how this is going so far. Your punctuation and grammar is phenomenal. Can't wait till you start on the Spyro fic!

P.S: I don't want to sound like a prick, so let me be blunt. It may be wise to put dialogue from two different people into two pars. For example:

1: "You should stay here,"The dragon said with kindness in his eyes. "I am not sure I can quite trust you just yet." The boy said nervously.

2:(revised) "You should stay here," the dragon said with kindness in his eyes.

The boy considered, than spoke. "I am not sure I can quite trust you just yet."

Boy this is long.

I'll offer to beta if you need it. Not saying you need it though.

Heya!

Sweet D: So he can speak to Dragons now, huh? Will you be expanding on the dragon thing or on the peacemaking thing (or on neither?) It'd be awesome to live with dragons, wouldn't that make a nice family?

Anyway, keep on writing :)

Great start! I haven't played runescape, but this seems promising!

This is a very nice little intro, I hope you will continue. All I want to know is: where is this cavern? Is it 'just some random'-cavern? I'd also like to know more about the character, so I can sympathize (which is good for the story)

Anyway, I hope you'll continue!